Manifesto Posted November 25, 2010 Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 Can't wait for the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† RazorDan Posted December 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Chapter 7: DespairStuy dropped to his knees. She's dead. He couldn't believe it. It was just impossible. As flames engulfed the wrecked car, Kane put a hand on Stuy's shoulder." I want a word with you,"" Speak then," replied Stuy bitterly. Kane sighed." She's alive,"Stuy gasped." How? Look at the wreck!" he exclaimed. Kane sighed again." Ok, look I'm part of a special group. A certain movement that targets the HCS,"" HCS? Oh my god! You mean the U.N's anti-hexer division?"Kane nodded." Why?" asked Stuy. Kane smiled." Do you remember the Civil Rights movement in the south of America?" he asked." What? That was ages ago," " Well, it was before you were born but I was very mutch there. The disgusting treatment of non-whites was horrible. They were beaten, hung, abused, spat at and those disgusting practices are exactly what the H.C.S organisation is about. Your friend Oblivia, can teleport and I expect she's at home right now," he said, matter-of-factly. Stuy's eyes were very wide." Amazing," he breathed. Kane grinned." Stuy. You have powers too," he stated." WHAT?!" exclaimed Stuy. Kane chuckled." Just wait. They should bloom soon,"" But I'm just an ordinary mechanic!" " It doesn't matter. You have proper Hexer blood in you,"Stuy stared into space, mouth agape. Suddenly, he remembered something." Wait! You said you were there for the civil rights war! Impossible, you can't be a day over 37!"Kane laughed again." I'm immortal. I can teleport. I can wipe memories. Just think of me as the King Hexer. Oh and watch out for a guy called Iki. He'll eat you alive, if you fought him."With that final revelation, Kane disappeared, leaving Stuy even more stunned.It hurts. Oh how it hurts. Who am I? What am I? Is anyone out there? Do you know who I am? Can you help me? I need you to help me. Please miss, only you can hear my cries. Help me, help me, help me.........Eve screamed. Her head killed her. The voice was getting stronger and stronger and there was nothing she could do. That same voice, invading her mind every night when she tried to sleep. She tried to stay awake but it was impossible. She had been beautiful once. Men would ogle her and think lustful thoughts but ever since the voice had come, she had turned into a wreck. Paranoia infecting her every waking moment." What's happening to me?" she muttered, aloud, her voice filled with pain and agony. So wrapped up was she in her world of despair, that she didn't notice the figure at her window. The Hexer Reaper had come for her and her days were numbered....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bardon Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 So the killing starts now? And what took you so long? xD lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stuy Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 i can only describe this in two words...F**KING AWESOME!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krogothwolf Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 Nice Razor, pretty nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idl12 Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 Sure was worth the wait, good job Razor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivia Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Ah dammit! Really thought it was another chapter... >.< I've read this one, but in a hurry, couldn't leave a comment. Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one, but my guess is that I will have to... >.> Just don't keep it too long, will ya? ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† RazorDan Posted December 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Ah dammit! Really thought it was another chapter... >.< I've read this one, but in a hurry, couldn't leave a comment. Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one, but my guess is that I will have to... >.> Just don't keep it too long, will ya? ;Ddont worry oby lol, exams mostly finished so next chap should be up in a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manifesto Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 keep it up Razor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† RazorDan Posted January 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 Due to the festive period and lack of active people, i didnt post the next chap. well here it is!Chapter 8: SeductionIki stood on the platform above the ring below. He looked calm, composed and at ease, completely unlike most 18 year olds, but then again he was different from any teenager, ever. Despite his outward appearance, however, inside he was excited, for they were about to see whether his new Hex machine had given the notorious mercenary, Ballard, powers. In the ring, Ballard sighed. " Hexer huh? Hope it manifests into something good," he said aloud. Suddenly, a metal door opened and a really tall, dark haired man stepped in. Ballard, a man who had killed over 1000 people, was immediately apprehensive. The man oozed evil and the smell of death enveloped his entire being. He had dark brown, almost black eyes. He was obviously well-muscled and he had a deep scar that ran diagnolly across the middle of his nose. Iki called out," This is my second in command, Edan. I'm sure you've heard of him!"Ballard gasped." Edan the Reaper," he breathed. He gasped again." You mean he's the Hexer Reaper?!"Now Iki gasped." You are also very intelligent, Ballard! Yes he is!" called Iki. Glancing at Edan, he said," Where's Eve?" Edan looked up." With Dr Mason, she is unconsious"" Good. Now Ballard, Edan is an Elite for he has two powers. His first ability is super strength. The second is very interesting for he can absorb the life force, the soul of a human."Ballard cursed. He knew what was coming." He's able to use this ability to take the abilities of hexers too. You must fight him to discover your power!"" Shit" muttered Ballard." Dennis! Get out here!" yelled Rezin. Dennis walked from the back of the antique store, cursing. Why did I come work here? He spotted the elderly customer and smiled." How may I help you miss?"" I'm just a cashier, this man is called Dennis. He will help you" smiled Rezin, before walking away. Some mate he is, cursed Dennis." What seems to be the problem, miss?" he asked politely." Well! I bought a desk from you, two days ago and it collapsed as soon as I put my computer on it!" exclaimed the woman. " Mam, that desk was an antique, like I told you then, it was inappropriate to use it in such a way. Sorry but we are not liable for any damages."" How dare you?!" yelled the old lady, in shock. Dennis got angry." Well, look here-"" Is everything ok gran?" interrupted a girl. Glancing at her, Dennis' jaw dropped. She was gorgeous. Tall, long blonde hair, clear blue eyes, a beautiful, fair face and with a supermodel's physique. She wore a tight black top that hugged her figure and emphasised her curves, as well as showing plenty of cleveage and a sizeable bust. She also wore a high cut skirt that showed off her great legs." H-hello miss," stammered Dennis, gulping. Who is this goddess? Rezin was also stunned at her appearance but he felt a strange feeling. It happened when the girl had said gran. The old woman looked confused." Get in the car gran, I'll sort this out," said the woman confidently. To the old woman, the voice took on a hypnotic tone and turned her eyes cloudy." Yes, child," she replied, before turning and exiting the shop. Dennis' eyes were glued to the younger woman and he didn't notice the elder woman leave. Rezin, however, did." My name is Yoko," smiled the woman at Dennis. She grabbed his hand, sending shivers through his body, and shook it." I'm D-Dennis," he replied. Yoko ran a hand through her hair and shot him a dazzling smile." Oh please let my gran have a new desk," she implored. Dennis nodded." S-Sure which one would you like?"" Are there anymore, I don't like the ones here,"" Yeah, um, there's some in the back, I'll show you," he stammered. As he turned away, Yoko grabbed his arm." Not so fast!" she smiled sweetly, linking their arms. Dennis felt a sensation in his groin area. Uh oh. He led her to the back. Rezin frowned. His power told him the girl was lying. He moved towards the back but was stopped by a man stepping in his path." One moment sir," said Rezin. The man pointed a gun at his face. " No one goes in there," he smiled." What's this room?" asked Yoko." Its my temporary bedroom," replied Dennis nervously. Yoko looked at him and smiled seductively. She ran into the room." Don't go in there!"She looked at his walls and smiled. There were loads of pictures of semi-naked, tall, blonde girls with large breasts. Just like her." Oh so am I your type?" grinned Yoko, dragging Dennis into the room. Noticing the bulge in his pants, her grin widened. She pushed him onto the bed." I'll take that as a yes," Dennis gasped. I'm the luckiest man alive! He was so intent on watching her strip, he didn't notice the knife she held behind her back.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idl12 Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 She can stab me with that knife as much as she wants:beauty: I want more!!!! and Good call with choosing her name lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero D. Ace Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 well, yoko IS his biggest weakness. dammit idl, you see now what your stuff gets you into. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† The Joker Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 lol iki! I want more chapters raz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idl12 Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 well, yoko IS his biggest weakness. dammit idl, you see now what your stuff gets you into.I'm loving what my stuff has gotten me into at this point lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† The Joker Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 haha why doesn't that suprise me Idl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bardon Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 Rofl way to favor idl12 on this! XD Just make sure it doesn't get any further than that and the next chapter involves stabbing otherwise i'm gonna have to call the japanese guys and have em slap a mature rating on it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idl12 Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 Aww come on she doesn't have to stab me immediately, you know, she can let me "stab" her a few times in my own way, then she can spank- I mean stab me all she wants baby! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
opem Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 i cant believe it i just started reading today im a bad guy that kinda suck but al well p.s dennis that lucky man, too bad lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kay Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 so far so good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Anras Rune Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 lol, at least idll will die happy, with a smile on his face! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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