† The Joker Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Oby... defeated... NOOO!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero D. Ace Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 you were SUPPOSED to get this out by sunday.9 days late!!!very well, i'll forgive you if you can put a new chapter a little early next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivia Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 I iz defeated??!! o.O Lol, awesome chapter like always Raz. *thumbs up* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† RazorDan Posted October 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 you were SUPPOSED to get this out by sunday.9 days late!!!very well, i'll forgive you if you can put a new chapter a little early next time.how about tommorow? there are deaths next chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Talena Mae Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Hehehehehe *ahem* more! I really like lots! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos92 Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Oby!!!!! How can you be defeated!Good chapter man. : ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rezin King Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 chaos omg your back btw razor good story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivia Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Peoplez, use spoilerz please, Shade gotz spoiled ;D2Chaos, Do you think I can be defeated that easily? I'll be back alive and kicking in no time and mah foes will dearly regret it! >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Talena Mae Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 I iz defeated??!! o.O Lol, awesome chapter like always Raz. *thumbs up*she asks for spoilers when she posts that herself? >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivia Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 she asks for spoilers when she posts that herself? >.>That's sth totally different sis... >.> *darting eyes* And...and...and... Random is the chain-starter! STONE HIM!!! Lol, ummm j/k Randy *huggles* xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† The Joker Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 *huggles oby* I won't hold it against you... *whispers to himself* much... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Talena Mae Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 what he means to say is "If I told you that you had a good body... would you hold it against me?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krogothwolf Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 I have great fear if I was the one who shot her with a tranquilizer. I hope it was something extremely potent then at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivia Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 It better be a type of elephant tranquilizer... >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† RazorDan Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Chapter 14" He killed Leki," said Mae softly." He what?!Chaos sighed." It wasn't me," he said." Oh yeah? Who was it then?!" exclaimed Shazi." Eve" said Chaos simply. Mae gasped." Huh?!" cried Shade. Shazi was so surprised, she nearly dropped the sword." Liar!" she yelled. Chaos sighed again." Let me explain........"CRASH! " What is it Scott?" gasped Shade in alarm. Scott turned to look at him. " Someone shot out our tyres," he replied. " SHIT!" cursed Chaos. Suddenly, two shots rang out." Take cover!" yelled Mae. After a pause, they all got back up. Shade drew a gun and tossed one to Mae. Shazi gave Chaos his sword and picked up the assault rifle from below the seat." Scott can you move the car?" asked Shade. There was no response." Scott?" Still no answer. Shade got up and leaned forward. " Shit," he sighed." What is it," asked Mae worriedly. She leaned forward and gasped. There slumped in the front seats were Scott and Amber, with bullets between their eyes. Dead. Mae sunk into her seat, breathing heavily." Are they-?" asked Shazi. Mae nodded. Suddenly Shade kicked open the door." Shade! What are you doing?!" exclaimed Mae." BASTARDS! WHO KILLED THEM?!" he roared. Another shot rang out and Shade dropped to his knees and leveled his sniper. As he lined up the target, a voice called out. " Stop Shade," Shade's eyes widened and Mae, Shazi and Chaos all gasped for standing there was Poe and with her was a squad of 30 soldiers, all of them pointing their guns towards Shade's group." Freeze now!" she ordered. Chaos was the first to recover from his shock." I don't think so Poe!" He took Shazi's gun. Poe laughed." We have your comrades. If you shoot they all die!" she boasted. Chaos swore. Mae and Shazi tensed. Sighing, Shade raised his arms." We surrender," he said softly. Chaos dropped the gun and imitated Shade, as did the girls." This sucks," muttered Mae.Hiding a short distance away, Eve sighed. She watched as her friends were taken away." Just wait guys, I'll free you" she muttered.Random walked into headquarters and froze. It was quiet, too quiet. He walked tentatively towards Koby's office. When he reached it he swore and drew his gun. Meglad, Koby's bodyguard, lay dead in his chair. Random cautiously entered the room and saw Ballard sitting there." You! What are you doing here?" gasped Random." Hello. You may know me as Police Chief Ballard but I'm now taking over Kametsu," he grinned." What? You mean this is all your doing?"" Why of course," Random leveled the gun at Ballard." Where's Koby?" he demanded." I'm over here," said a voice behind him. Random turned around." Sir! What-" he was silenced by Koby's knife sliding between his ribs." Why?" gasped Random, sinking to the floor. Koby smiled coldly at him."Sorry mate but i play for the winning team,"" Ba-Bastard," breathed Random. He lay there on the floor." I'm sorry Oby," He took his last breath and died......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† The Joker Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 put this in spoiler to keep mae and oby happy lolO.O... Koby... Killed me... I thought I'd be the first death, and hoped it would be random... but even I didn't suspect something like THAT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krogothwolf Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Oby won't be happy probably till she's holding my head in her hands! I really hope it was an elephants tranq. With triple dosage! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Talena Mae Posted October 20, 2010 Report Share Posted October 20, 2010 OMG! I can't wait for the next! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero D. Ace Posted October 20, 2010 Report Share Posted October 20, 2010 so, you've killed ... lets see, Scott, Random, Amber and Leki so far. who will be next?*dramatic music* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivia Posted October 20, 2010 Report Share Posted October 20, 2010 *gasps* noooo......... NOOOOOOOEEEEEEEEEEZ!!!!!!! Not teh (screw spoilers!!!) Randy!!!! Someone will pay for this.........*to the sky* Randy, I will avenge you! And take care of your cactus, no worriez!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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