Murder at the convention... (Gore)

[idl12]

Jesus Christ! it's like watching an episode of the Twilight Zone only for it to go on break, the suspense is killing me more than any murderer ever could! Great job Mae!

[† Talena Mae]

Koby love, it was no alcohol at the actual convention, this is now in the hotel that is why people of age can drink =P

[† Shazi]

O_O blood and guts >.<

< *is squimish*

[Empathy]

*Makes sure staying with Ren* Wow so each of the Supes are dying. No clue whose doing it. Nothing to say someone who was in the room could have done it as its easy to kill someone lay the body out then go with everyone else.

Nice story Mae

**Edit 1** erm...I just realised I could be setting myself up here....

[wolfmother]

wow mae that is awesome. and poor ballard copped it. whos next i wonder. great story mae

[† The Joker]

wow... just... wow... there goes my theory on this being filled with the usual sorta stuff (posion, guns etc!)

[Omar_XIII]

lol was this way you were saying you were going to kill wolf on the cb? XD great addition

[Chaos92]

Nice job keep it coming. Wolfs death was sad but hey at least he put up for a hell of a fight.

[Empathy]

I agree with Chaos, at least Wolf put up a fight and you also gave us a clue which is great. Keep it coming mae mae

[† Talena Mae]

I have given two I think... The person is small.... And Wolf knows knew the killer xD

[idl12]

Awesome stuff, this has to be the best death so far.

[Renzourin]

great stuff sissy keep it going

[Nero D. Ace]

well that rules me out since i'm 6 feet tall

OH NO! THAT MEANS I COULD DIE!!!

[† Talena Mae]

well that rules me out since i'm 6 feet tall

OH NO! THAT MEANS I COULD DIE!!!

>.> punner.... I closed the invertations to be added to this AGES before you asked to be added... I am sorry but it is to late to add you

[Koby]

Wolf is wolfmother right? Sometimes I can't keep up with all the nicknames. xD Well I think this chapter just confirms once again that it's neither Icarus, Empy, or me. As if that could ever have been the case anyways. This has me wondering, who else here at Kametsu is small, who does Wolf talk to often, and who was his girlfriend who was also killed, was it not someone from Kametsu as to the reason no name was mentioned? Each chapter answers very few if any questions, but they create that much more questions. Great story for suspension and mystery. I enjoy reading them when you release a chapter, too bad it takes so long between them, but then that does only increase the suspense as well. xD

I'm still thinking it's either Eve, Zadra, or Mask. Although not sure if they are small.

Aside from that, there were a couple of errors such as using her instead of she, or duplicates of the word instead of the word needed like "He had to her her" I am thinking was meant to be "He had to get her" but we all make mistakes like that at some point, so =P and it didn't effect the story, so all good. I love you. ^.^

[† Talena Mae]

Wolf is wolfmother right? Sometimes I can't keep up with all the nicknames. xD Well I think this chapter just confirms once again that it's neither Icarus, Empy, or me. As if that could ever have been the case anyways. This has me wondering, who else here at Kametsu is small, who does Wolf talk to often, and who was his girlfriend who was also killed, was it not someone from Kametsu as to the reason no name was mentioned? Each chapter answers very few if any questions, but they create that much more questions. Great story for suspension and mystery. I enjoy reading them when you release a chapter, too bad it takes so long between them, but then that does only increase the suspense as well. xD

I'm still thinking it's either Eve, Zadra, or Mask. Although not sure if they are small.

Yes Wolf is Wolfmother, he is a good 6foot + So it can be anyone who is smaller then that =D

You are right, his girlfriend is not from Kametsu, but I thought... even though she dies... he would want her with him...

As for the raising more questions, good ^.^ I am glad it does, but all lose ends will be tied up later.

As to the comment about length... well you distract me... How can I think of killing someone when we are being all lovey? xD

[Shade_13]

A nice death, dark and tense... still not the tentacle rape, though ;D

I'm not even trying to guess who the killer is, I let Talena play with my brains as long as she wishes. Besides, the last thing i would know about a fellow kametsu member is her\his height.

Yeah, and sorry to see you die, Wolf, at least your gf is with you, and you join Talena and Ba11ard. Have fun, mate.

Edit: And, as always, with all this rambling i forgot to say i liked the writing style... oh well, that's why we've got the edit buttons.

[wolfmother]

awesome death mae, cheers for that. i have a suspician about who it is but i am gonna keep it to myself. dead men tell no tales. hhhhmmmm at least i not the killer. i can tell you all though the killer has eyes like a crab, hooks on both hands, a face crisscrossed in scars and wearing a leotard! ok maybe i didn't look XD avenge mine( and steph's), ballards and mae's deaths. but mainly mine XD

[† poetictragedy]

Oh noez, not Shazi! This story is awesome, Mae.

For some reason, I completely missed the release of part 5. >_>

[Koby]

Wait so this happened at the same time as the predicament with wolf?

If so, that means there is at least two killers!

and I thought no one could catch the shazi-chan? xD She didn't even get a chance to run or put up a fight. LOL.. poor shazi.