idl12 Posted August 12, 2010 Report Share Posted August 12, 2010 Jesus Christ! it's like watching an episode of the Twilight Zone only for it to go on break, the suspense is killing me more than any murderer ever could! Great job Mae! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Talena Mae Posted August 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2010 Koby love, it was no alcohol at the actual convention, this is now in the hotel that is why people of age can drink =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Shazi Posted August 13, 2010 Report Share Posted August 13, 2010 O_O blood and guts >.<< *is squimish* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Empathy Posted August 14, 2010 Report Share Posted August 14, 2010 *Makes sure staying with Ren* Wow so each of the Supes are dying. No clue whose doing it. Nothing to say someone who was in the room could have done it as its easy to kill someone lay the body out then go with everyone else.Nice story Mae**Edit 1** erm...I just realised I could be setting myself up here.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfmother Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 wow mae that is awesome. and poor ballard copped it. whos next i wonder. great story mae Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† The Joker Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 wow... just... wow... there goes my theory on this being filled with the usual sorta stuff (posion, guns etc!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omar_XIII Posted August 21, 2010 Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 lol was this way you were saying you were going to kill wolf on the cb? XD great addition Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos92 Posted August 21, 2010 Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 Nice job keep it coming. Wolfs death was sad but hey at least he put up for a hell of a fight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Empathy Posted August 21, 2010 Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 I agree with Chaos, at least Wolf put up a fight and you also gave us a clue which is great. Keep it coming mae mae Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Talena Mae Posted August 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 I have given two I think... The person is small.... And Wolf knows knew the killer xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idl12 Posted August 21, 2010 Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 Awesome stuff, this has to be the best death so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzourin Posted August 21, 2010 Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 great stuff sissy keep it going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero D. Ace Posted August 21, 2010 Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 well that rules me out since i'm 6 feet tall OH NO! THAT MEANS I COULD DIE!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Talena Mae Posted August 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 well that rules me out since i'm 6 feet tall OH NO! THAT MEANS I COULD DIE!!!>.> punner.... I closed the invertations to be added to this AGES before you asked to be added... I am sorry but it is to late to add you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koby Posted August 21, 2010 Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 Wolf is wolfmother right? Sometimes I can't keep up with all the nicknames. xD Well I think this chapter just confirms once again that it's neither Icarus, Empy, or me. As if that could ever have been the case anyways. This has me wondering, who else here at Kametsu is small, who does Wolf talk to often, and who was his girlfriend who was also killed, was it not someone from Kametsu as to the reason no name was mentioned? Each chapter answers very few if any questions, but they create that much more questions. Great story for suspension and mystery. I enjoy reading them when you release a chapter, too bad it takes so long between them, but then that does only increase the suspense as well. xDI'm still thinking it's either Eve, Zadra, or Mask. Although not sure if they are small.Aside from that, there were a couple of errors such as using her instead of she, or duplicates of the word instead of the word needed like "He had to her her" I am thinking was meant to be "He had to get her" but we all make mistakes like that at some point, so =P and it didn't effect the story, so all good. I love you. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Talena Mae Posted August 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 Wolf is wolfmother right? Sometimes I can't keep up with all the nicknames. xD Well I think this chapter just confirms once again that it's neither Icarus, Empy, or me. As if that could ever have been the case anyways. This has me wondering, who else here at Kametsu is small, who does Wolf talk to often, and who was his girlfriend who was also killed, was it not someone from Kametsu as to the reason no name was mentioned? Each chapter answers very few if any questions, but they create that much more questions. Great story for suspension and mystery. I enjoy reading them when you release a chapter, too bad it takes so long between them, but then that does only increase the suspense as well. xDI'm still thinking it's either Eve, Zadra, or Mask. Although not sure if they are small.Yes Wolf is Wolfmother, he is a good 6foot + So it can be anyone who is smaller then that =D You are right, his girlfriend is not from Kametsu, but I thought... even though she dies... he would want her with him...As for the raising more questions, good ^.^ I am glad it does, but all lose ends will be tied up later.As to the comment about length... well you distract me... How can I think of killing someone when we are being all lovey? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shade_13 Posted August 21, 2010 Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 A nice death, dark and tense... still not the tentacle rape, though ;DI'm not even trying to guess who the killer is, I let Talena play with my brains as long as she wishes. Besides, the last thing i would know about a fellow kametsu member is her\his height.Yeah, and sorry to see you die, Wolf, at least your gf is with you, and you join Talena and Ba11ard. Have fun, mate.Edit: And, as always, with all this rambling i forgot to say i liked the writing style... oh well, that's why we've got the edit buttons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfmother Posted August 22, 2010 Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 awesome death mae, cheers for that. i have a suspician about who it is but i am gonna keep it to myself. dead men tell no tales. hhhhmmmm at least i not the killer. i can tell you all though the killer has eyes like a crab, hooks on both hands, a face crisscrossed in scars and wearing a leotard! ok maybe i didn't look XD avenge mine( and steph's), ballards and mae's deaths. but mainly mine XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† poetictragedy Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 Oh noez, not Shazi! This story is awesome, Mae. For some reason, I completely missed the release of part 5. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koby Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 Wait so this happened at the same time as the predicament with wolf? If so, that means there is at least two killers!and I thought no one could catch the shazi-chan? xD She didn't even get a chance to run or put up a fight. LOL.. poor shazi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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