Torture chamber (Gore)

[† Talena Mae]

Part XI

Eve lightly ran down the stairs and passed the table where Koby was tied, as she passed Josh Eve trailed her fingers over his face before continuing down the stairs. Looking around Eve failed to find the person she was after so she slid up behind Shazi.

"Hey Sis," She spoke to get Shazi's attention. Shazi jumped and turned around to face Eve, her hands between her breasts a little squeak sounded from her. Before Shazi could put together a sentence Eve spoke again. "Where is The guy who got Talena?"

A smirk spread across Shazis' beautiful face as she jerked a thumb and a wall behind her. "He is behind the cloud wall, Mute made it clear that he is to heal before we have a chance at him though." Shazi's face fell as she repeated the orders given to her. "Though you are welcome to any of the others..."

"I wanted him though..."

"Mute said no sorry Sis... How about you help me with the Chinese Iron maiden? It is nearly ready and Opem has been squirming for a while now."

"What are you going to do to him?" Eve inquired interested now.

"Oh well, you see I have set this up and I am going to stick him in the coffin, and close the lid... After making a little heat I will tell him how the Chinese iron maiden works... then ones it gets a little hotter, well, that is after he passes out I will open the lid and stick him back in his cell."

"And you say Talena and I are scary... You little sister, are so much worse then us." Eve replied taking a step back as Shazi shrugged.

"I like playing with peoples heads... That reminds me, can you flick the switch on the rainbow wall for me please? "

Eve nodded and did as Shazi asked flipping on the switch, "the sound of music" came on loudly filling the whole room with noise. Eve quickly covered her ears and shouted over the song, "What the hell?"

Shazi was doubled over with laughter, with tears streaming down her cheeks she indicated Eve could turn off the music.

"What the hell was that for Shazi?" She demanded angry and still yelling.

"That was just a bit of noise to keep them on their toes." Shazi pointed to the monitor and Eve curious had a look. "You see they were asleep, now they have been startled they are up and about.... What is fluffy doing!"

This time Eve was laughing, "He is playing with himself again Shazi." She managed to snort out between giggles.

"I am so going to ask Mute if someone can chop off his dick!" Shazi said storming off to do just that.

Eve watched her go and looked around the room. The coffin just needed to be put onto the stands and then the perpetrations would be complete. Eve grabbed the coffin and dragged it up and over to rest on the stands, stepping down a huge grin light her face as an idea came to mind.

[† Shazi]

oooooooooh vicious! me likey

[Rezin King]

haha i will never end up in the torture chamber

[Kekashi]

Awesome Mae, like always!!!! so when do I show up again?

[Clare]

Amazing chapter Mae! You're a really gifted writer! ^-^

[NickthePwn3r]

Wow mae i must say this is pretty good, haha poor fluffy

[† Talena Mae]

Sorry it has been so long since my last chapter, Rezin please see page 4 Part VIII, you are mentioned there.

Hope you all enjoy.

Part XII

Eve rushed up the stairs and quickly with the handle of the knife knocked out Opem once more, she hurriedly untied him and gripping his arm she hauled his torso to the side stepping back as her crumpled to the floor.

Taking a firm grip on his arms Eve began dragging him to the hidden stair well, as she struggled to pull him she noticed Koby watching. She dropped Opem and with a nasty grin she stuck her middle finger up at Koby before dragging the dead weight of the man down the stairs.

Reaching the bottom Eve then proceeded to drag him over to where Shazi had set up the Chinese iron maiden. With great difficulty Eve somehow managed to lift him into the already warm coffin, she secured his wrists and feet so he was standing and then sweating stepped down to make sure the coal was still hot.

Taking the long poker Eve stood on the stool Shazi used earlier and poked Opem. “Wha...?”

“Hello Opem, awake now?” Eve poked him again causing him to yell. “I take that as a 'yes', well I am going to spoil Shazi's fun now and tell you what exactly is going to happen to you.”

“Wait... Please...”

“This is a Chinese iron maiden, you are now locked into the coffin, you are standing on the grated bottom. I, your executioner will be pouring water onto hot coals beneath you. The mixture of hot coals and cold water will create a cloud of steam that shall enter the coffin, steaming you alive.” Eve smiled at him “Do you understand what is going to happen to you Opem?”

“I don't want to die...”

“I want you to die, I want everyone to die!” Eve yelled gripping her hair tightly. Coming back to herself she smiled, reaching over she flipped a switch. The first bucket of water hit the coals sending up a cloud of steam. Opem screamed and Eve closed the lid of the casket muffling him.

It was not until the last bucket had emptied that Shazi rushed into the room angry her words for the moment coming out in in garbled grunts.

“I wanted some fun.” Eve stated lifting her head her eyes shining brightly. “I could not have Random so I got him.”

As she jerked a thumb towards the now cooling off coffin, at that gesture Shazi found her words. “I was going to play with him Eve, what the hell were you thinking?”

“You can still play with him...” Eve said turning to walk up the stairs “He is a little dead and melted... but I am sure you could do something with it.”

[† Shazi]

scary! keep it up sis

[† Anras Rune]

FINALLY....took ya long enough....and er.....sorry opem...lmao!

[Kekashi]

AWESOME Chapter Mae!!! really terrifying!

[→Speed←]

very nice job mae! evil eve and shazi D= such scarey cuties haha opem got pwned! xD

[† Talena Mae]

Part XIII

The van drove up to the isolated house the horn honking madly sliding to a stop a tall brunette woman stepped out grinning from ear to ear. “Hey girls!” she called loudly to the woman standing at the door. “I got some good pickings!”

“Could you be any louder?” Asked Eve stepping through the door supporting Talena who was woken up by all the noise.

“Sure I can!” Mal sauntered over to the assembled girls and deftly picked up Mute to plant a big kiss on her lips. “Hello lover.”

“Mal, welcome home.” Mute whispered holding her girlfriend close. “So what did you bring for them to play with?”

“Oh that's right! I almost forgot about them.” She touched Mute's face tenderly “seeing you nearly drove everything from my head, come look, come look!”

They all walked over to the van Eve supporting Talena and with a happy yell Mal pulled open the door. On the floor of the van about twelve men were bound hand and foot.

“Let me see... Their names were Red, Apollo, Ballard, Evil, Dart, Gold, Prince, Ren, Irish, Kekky and Paddy...” Mal counted them on her fingers. “I don't think I have missed anyone out.”

“That many?” Talena urged Eve forward a smile on her face for the first time since her run in with random. “This is going to be fun. Shazi, do you have the room down there?”

Shazi cast Eve a dirty look before answering the question. “Yes, the cells on the 'night' wall are finished and clean.”

“Good, let's move them in there.” Talena took a step forward and wobbled.

“Back to bed for you Talena.” Mute whispered then looked at Mal. “For us too.”

“Oh I missed you!” Mal pulled Mute close as Eve led Talena into the house.

*****

“O.K What is going on?” Talena asked Eve after she settled into her bed.

“I killed Opem” Eve replied sitting next to her sister. “Shazi is pissed”

“She was putting him in the Chinese iron maiden... It would have killed him anyway.”

“I KNOW!!!” Eve yelled

[carlinm117]

cool looks good

[opem]

i died well that kinda disappointing but good story

[Libitinarius]

You did a fabulous job on this story so far, it was very challenging using the members of Kametsu in the story; yet, you pulled it off very nicely. I just hope you don't go so easy on Koby in the upcoming installments. At least take a finger or something? lol Nice work, will be checking back soon

P.S. I didn't comment prior because I told you how great it was in CB

[Rezin King]

you cant catch me im the gingerbread eating man

[† Mute point]

Another excellent chapter Mae!

[Malyssa Rahl]

I love it

[VolvoKing]

I see what you mean from our conversation. That is were we are different. You torture for revenge and give your victim a slow and painful death. I don't kill. Killing is for people who give mercy. I cripple them for life that way they are reminded when they grab there canes to walk what they have done. But this is a great story you should try to get this published as well.

[NickthePwn3r]

Great stuff mae, really happy to see you conitnued it.