Blood shot eyes~ A working title~

[† Talena Mae]

you guys are going to kill me! I have 7 up already @.@ Oh well, the next will be up tonight (for those in the U.S) ^.^

[Renzourin]

YAYS well if you wanna take a break you dont have to post at our command you know its still a great story we just wanna read it ^^ but post as you like we dont mind really 'waits with baited breath for the next one'

[Stuy]

Talena you are an incredible writer you are no hobbyist you are a full on novel writer and your work must be published. I am a harsh critic and and I chew through fantasy book's like water so don't think this is flatery cause it's not, I mean every dam word.

ps (keep it coming I can't wait to read more of this fantastic story)

am I the only one without a signature... oh well

[† Talena Mae]

Alright... Now I really am blushing.

Thank you very much Stuy, but this story still needs a lot of work. Thank you for your praise. I am really happy that my story here has gone over so well ^.^

[Oblivia]

This is just great! I totally agree with Stuy. I LOVE fantasy books and have read many bad ones, but this one is awsome. I am looking forward to read the end of it. Keep it coming! D: No pressure!

[Renzourin]

hurry ups were all waiting for your amazing story we wanna see more =D

[Yuna]

Wow... you got great Talent! Keep Going!!!

[† Talena Mae]

Hmm, one big problem there >.<; I can not work out where to go from here. I am open to suggestions on your thoughts and opinions if you have any ^.^

[† ballard]

You have an awesome story here . I really enjoyed reading it.

[† Talena Mae]

Aww thank you! *huggles* ^.^ I am trying to think of more to write.. I need a muse =P

[Oblivia]

Aww thank you! *huggles* ^.^ I am trying to think of more to write.. I need a muse =P

Lol, your muse is taking a vacation. D: This is bad... I really wanted to see what happened next and I am not good in writing stories so I am afraid I can't give you any suggestion. But take your time, you are really good writer and I am sure you will come up with sth.

[† Talena Mae]

Thank you Oblivia, It sucks when the muse does leave for a time... I will get there slowly lol

[Oblivia]

Not a problem, some things are worth waiting for. ^.~

If I can wait 5 years for George Martin to publish the sequel of his books, wiating for you would be a piece of cake. ^.^ But PLEASE, dont take that long. ^.^

Seriously, no need to push this story. Take your time...

[Renzourin]

yeah take your time well all be waiting for you when its ready

[Stuy]

um they could have a get to know you talk (deepen the known history of both charters)

[† Talena Mae]

um they could have a get to know you talk (deepen the known history of both charters)

I was going to do that near the end, I have that part already planned out >.<

If anyone has a suggestion for a title I am more then happy to consider it ^.^

[ds18]

continue the story its getting good!

[ウェンキ Leki]

Nice you will become a great writer in teh future.

[wolfmother]

yay more story thanks mae. i wonder what she is gonna do this time

[Koby]

>_< I somehow kept missing this story, I didn't remember how far I was so I just went back and read all 11 chapters from start to finish. I took my time letting everything sink in rather than read at my normal pace and it took me a good hour or so to read it all. =P

Very good story here Mae, from chapter one I had a feeling Jessica would somehow end up paired with Scott, lolz. Hope you continue to write more chapters.