† RazorDan Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 (edited) KametsuHave you heard?About the place?The place for wordlike Two FaceYeah that siteMade by Koby?Yeah, that's rightIts the best place to beSo you know do you?Iki, Mae, Rune, ObyTo name just a fewOf the amazing people that you'll meetIn the chatbox,Who you'll greet,Every hour of everdayYou don't even have to payTo talk and to download anime.I deeply thank King KobyFor allowing our communityTo beThe greatest thing,Since DBZ.Though my stay may be short,Though I may forgetAll its taughtI'll never lose the feelingOf unityAnd the relationships that will lastFor all eternity.Fun, exciting, lots to do,Oh what a wonderful placeIs KametsuRazorDan Edited October 7, 2012 by Emotional Outlet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trend Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Nice one razor it flows nicely, but one things missing.. wheres trend in all that? haha jk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† RazorDan Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 thanks a lot trend! im relieved you liked it since its the first poem ive ever done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stuy Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 very nice razor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidey5443 Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Wooot! Cool but WHERE AM I IN THE POEM....The most awesumest person of the forums lolz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wake Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Awesome poem andLike Trendsettah said, it has great flow It really shows some soul you know:cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivia Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 Woot! I am in it! And of course it is great. ^.~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idl12 Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 For some reason this makes me feel sad lol, nice work man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Anras Rune Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 Woot! I am in it! And of course it is great. ^.~Im in it too!! see that oby...me and youz are special!!!lol...pretty good poem dan...especially for your first! XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Shazi Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 why is it i hadn't read this earlier? oh wellz, nicely done raz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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