Kametsu [poem]

[† RazorDan]

Kametsu

Have you heard?

About the place?

The place for word

like Two Face

Yeah that site

Made by Koby?

Yeah, that's right

Its the best place to be

So you know do you?

Iki, Mae, Rune, Oby

To name just a few

Of the amazing people that you'll meet

In the chatbox,

Who you'll greet,

Every hour of everday

You don't even have to pay

To talk and to download anime.

I deeply thank King Koby

For allowing our community

To be

The greatest thing,

Since DBZ.

Though my stay may be short,

Though I may forget

All its taught

I'll never lose the feeling

Of unity

And the relationships that will last

For all eternity.

Fun, exciting, lots to do,

Oh what a wonderful place

Is Kametsu

RazorDan

Edited October 7, 2012 by Emotional Outlet

[Trend]

Nice one razor it flows nicely, but one things missing.. wheres trend in all that? haha jk

[† RazorDan]

thanks a lot trend! im relieved you liked it since its the first poem ive ever done

[Stuy]

very nice razor

[spidey5443]

Wooot! Cool but WHERE AM I IN THE POEM....The most awesumest person of the forums lolz

[Wake]

Awesome poem and

Like Trendsettah said, it has great flow

It really shows some soul you know:cool:

[Oblivia]

Woot! I am in it! And of course it is great. ^.~

[idl12]

For some reason this makes me feel sad lol, nice work man

[† Anras Rune]

Woot! I am in it! And of course it is great. ^.~

Im in it too!! see that oby...me and youz are special!!!

lol...pretty good poem dan...especially for your first! XP

[† Shazi]

why is it i hadn't read this earlier? oh wellz, nicely done raz!