Raining Bloody Feathers, a KALS Short [short story]

[† Irish]

Great read, keep it up and I might have to print this out into a book and read it away from my pc....

[† RazorDan]

awesome stuff, probably your best work =P

[† Talena Mae]

Honest opinion: It is a lot better then the others you have written (meaning no offence here) You have done as I suggested a while ago by adding the gaps so it is not a wall of text.

This story draws you in a lot more and it keeps you reading. Well done and I look forward to reading more.

[Libitinarius]

You have inspired me to pick up my story again. Dazzling descriptions really do articulate your deep imagination of the environments you are conveying. I cannot wait to find out what the masses of angels intentions are moving forward.