A Permanent Disease

[AxelVIII]

You make friends,

 

You build bonds.

 

You have fun times,

 

You have happy times.

 

You feel as though the good times will never end.

 

You get bullied,

 

Your bonds are broken,

 

You experience betrayal,

 

Abandonment,

 

A sense of loneliness and darkness.

 

You don't know why things happened the way they did,

 

You don't know why the ones you cared about are gone,

 

And one day you are told you are sick, and that is the reason things are

as they are.

 

You are told there is no treatment,

 

No cure for your illness.

 

You are bound with shackles for the rest of time.

Edited March 2, 2014 by AxelVIII

[Dark_Angel13]

A little dark but I liked it

[† RazorDan]

Very powerful. Made me remember a lot of things. Well done dude.

[Waukheon]

An honest exposure, tumblr readers might like it as well.

[AxelVIII]

Thanks Dan, Dark.

[KilamAllaH]

That really hit home for me. I know it must of took a lot of courage to right that so congrats and keep up to poetry.

[AxelVIII]

Thanks for the comment, and yeah, learning that lesson was difficult.

[Pav]

I thought I was reading about my life, until I got to the part about being sick, or maybe I yet to hear the bad news o.o lol

 

I like it you are a true artist

[AxelVIII]

Thank you for the nice comment

[striker09]

hahaha!!lol,,nice  one,,

[Dark_Angel13]

hahaha!!lol,,nice  one,,

 

This is a rather dark poem so what exactly did you find amusing in it?

[professa X]

I look at my life and become extremely thankful