Life

[AxelVIII]

"A path that branches off depending on what we do, and what we say.

 

I attempt to walk forward on this path, 

 

But In the end, 

 

As the sun sets on me,

 

My eyes are behind me,

 

Focused on the past instead.

 

Is it because I miss what I have lost,

 

Or is it because I am afraid of the pain the future might bring?"

 

 

 

[Any name ideas would be helpful, never was good at naming things.]

 

Thanks for reading.

Edited March 2, 2014 by AxelVIII

[Dark_Angel13]

It's a nice poem and quite deep, the only name I could think of for it was Life actually lol, I'm usually not good at naming things unless they're characters haha

[† RazorDan]

It's certainly thought provoking, good job man. Very solemn. How about 'humanity'

[† Emotional Outlet]

Life is actually a pretty good title and then you could cut out "Life" on the first line.

[AxelVIII]

Alright, then I think I'll do that. Thanks for the comments, the more feedback I get, the better I feel about it. Thanks

[Dark_Angel13]

Alright, then I think I'll do that. Thanks for the comments, the more feedback I get, the better I feel about it. Thanks

 

You're welcome and keep posting stuff, I'd like to see more of your poetry