Kikazu Posted September 19, 2007 Report Share Posted September 19, 2007 Not that great. No border. Barely any work on it, but mainly because I was just trying something I haven't done before. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† shinji Posted September 19, 2007 Report Share Posted September 19, 2007 As you said, it's not that graet.Try playing around more with the Brightness & contarst. u need to work in that along with ur lighting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anooxy Posted September 19, 2007 Report Share Posted September 19, 2007 You really don't like renders, do you O_o? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyo Posted September 19, 2007 Report Share Posted September 19, 2007 I think this, like alot of your work, lacks something to focus on. there isn't much going on in your composition and there is almost nothing to focus on thus making the final product a little bland and unappealing. Now, contrary to what SasukeX may think, you don't need a render as a focus, they are usually just easier. however from what i can tell i'd take Shinji's advice. work with brightness and contrast between your colours and perhaps make a layer with something that sticks out a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kikazu Posted September 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2007 That one has more experimental stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyo Posted September 19, 2007 Report Share Posted September 19, 2007 now that I like. that's such a vast improvement. much more eye catching and you've done well keeping me guessing too. it kinda looks like there is something there in the back like people or something. good job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-PHXN- New001 Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 I agree. The second has much more focus.The first just looked like a simple background.The second is a tad over contrasted, but the colors arent too rash either. So I'd say its pretty neat.Whats your main technique? Filters or brushes? (or other) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kikazu Posted September 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Mainly brushing. Colored brushing on first three layers then just black & white brushing with more layers then curves and brightness/contrast. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† shinji Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 You should use Filters. People say its nooby touse filters, but its always helpful to use it. IE,, i always use filters in my sigs, as well as other effects.That said, it is an improvement. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anooxy Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Contrary to what SasukeX thinks o.o? I didn't say it was bad, I just pointed out the fact that he has never made a sig with renders (from what I know). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kikazu Posted September 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Oh I did, but a horrible one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kikazu Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 Damn I double-posted, but for a good cause. Didn't want to start a new topic, so I'm just going to dump whatever I make in here.Love you guys for helping out Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koby Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 Text needs work, and I think its a bit over-brushed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kikazu Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 The text is my mark for no-ripping. Yeah, I also think it's overbrushed too, but I'm starting to get it now. Atleast it's better than before right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenacious Lee Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 I think this, like alot of your work, lacks something to focus on. there isn't much going on in your composition and there is almost nothing to focus on thus making the final product a little bland and unappealing. Now, contrary to what SasukeX may think, you don't need a render as a focus, they are usually just easier. however from what i can tell i'd take Shinji's advice. work with brightness and contrast between your colours and perhaps make a layer with something that sticks out a bit.I agree with Kyo, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kikazu Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 So..what do you think of the new ones? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kikazu Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 Set One.Rushed that one ^Spiderman-ish. Colors are like Spider-man So I named it after him.Forest. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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