Something random that you should read. :D

[Shigotami Ryuko]

The boy with his dark blade pulls it out of the sleek smooth sheath.

"You pushed me to far..." he said in a quiet, serious voice. He made a swift movement towards his opponent. His opponent just stood there quiet waiting for the boy to move to him.

"I got you now," said his opponent. Suddenly, a bright light came from his opponent. The boy was blinded for several seconds and that was all he needed. He ran towards the boy, kneed him hard in the stomach. The boy coughed up blood, still trying to see what was around him. His opponent then hit his face with his left muscular fist and the upper cutted with his right. The boy just stared up at his opponent. The opponent pulled off his mask...

"Brother!" shouted the boy.

"You are truly weak my little brother," said the older brother. "Why are you trying to destroy the town?"

"To prove... to myself that I can amount to something for once in my life! Mother and Father... all they cared about was you. They ignored me! I was lonely and I want revenge. If I can destroy what they were trying so hard for! I know that I can finally amount to somet-"

"Enough! You are truly selfish! I always have been here during all the hard times. I protected you! I went through many challenges and unbearable pain for you! I'm sick of the darkness in your soul," said the angry older brother. He held out his hand. "You will be changed, prepare yourself!" The younger brother could no longer sense anything around him. He felt suddenly better though, but all he could see was darkness and a grey ground. The fog was making his vision blurry. But it all disappeared. He was being lifted and soon he could see where he was. Everything evil inside of him was being destroyed...

Thanks for reading! You should try adding on if you would like! I would love to see what you guys would write from this point in the story. I hope I didn't do to bad. This was the first story that I made up off the top of my head and put out for public so please enjoy.

Edited October 7, 2012 by Emotional Outlet

[Rezin King]

very awesome dude i should be inspired to write more of my story due to this

[lemmingllama]

You should write more, really good! Was this based on anything? I kinda feel a whole alternate reality Naruto vibe

[RikuoAmero]

I definitely got a Sasuke/Itachi vibe off of this.

[Shigotami Ryuko]

The only anime I watched was Fairy Tail, DBZ, and some other stuff. I only watched a few episodes of Naruto but my story wasn't meant to mimic that.

But I think I can see where you got that from.