† Irish Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 I just created this and looking for some CnC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
griffinheart Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 Hmmm.... CnC? Sure~The render and the bg don't seem to go together very well and the brush stroke on the right doesnt seem to fit, but other than that it looks pretty good~ Maybe add some more green onto it?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Irish Posted January 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 Hmmm.... CnC? Sure~The render and the bg don't seem to go together very well and the brush stroke on the right doesnt seem to fit, but other than that it looks pretty good~ Maybe add some more green onto it?~Its not a render, Its a stock....V1V2V3this is before i add brush strokes or anything... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
griffinheart Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 I like version 2 ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koby Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 Version 2 is the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Zero- Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 Personally, I would go with V2, it could use more things in it but it's your design so yeah...i like it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ウェンキ Leki Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 I like this It looks good with the color emphasized. Also nice you removed the white stroke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manifesto Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 Yeah I like that one too leki. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ウェンキ Leki Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 Nice and Dawned I like the pattern on you avatar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koby Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 I like this It looks good with the color emphasized. Also nice you removed the white strokeTo be honest that one has no flow what so ever. The render/stock just seems pasted onto an non-matching background. Leki I am shocked you would consider that the best being a graphic designer yourself. Remember flow, lighting, contrast, and blending all play apart. It's not a matter of personal preference but rather which does all of that the best that really shows someones graphical talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ウェンキ Leki Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 Well I did state it was to my personal preference.If I have to say it as a professional I would say V2But the one I stated about is my own choice.^_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Irish Posted January 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 Thanks for all the help... When I made it, I was also playing a Game on my Xbox and was thinking of making a sig of my Favorite anime...but again, thanks for all the help guys... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koby Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 Well I did state it was to my personal preference.If I have to say it as a professional I would say V2But the one I stated about is my own choice.^_-I didn't mean it quite like I made it sound (after I read what I said just now).What I mean is that when people show off their work or ask for C&C, we as fellow graphic designers should try to help them on those aspects as C&C to help them improve. We can still have favorites of course based on our own likes, but we should try to also give advice on what to do to improve if possible and which flows better, etc..I know I didn't do it myself though and I can't ask others to do what I myself didn't. I was planning on offering advice but at the time of my original post I didn't have much time to do so.Honestly a render like that is kind of hard to work with. I myself find that green or red really doesn't often flow correctly unless used on like colored designs. Hence why I felt v2 flowed a little better. The coloring helped it to feel like it belonged there rather than just pasted on top like the others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Irish Posted January 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 I didn't mean it quite like I made it sound (after I read what I said just now).What I mean is that when people show off their work or ask for C&C, we as fellow graphic designers should try to help them on those aspects as C&C to help them improve. We can still have favorites of course based on our own likes, but we should try to also give advice on what to do to improve if possible and which flows better, etc..I know I didn't do it myself though and I can't ask others to do what I myself didn't. I was planning on offering advice but at the time of my original post I didn't have much time to do so.Honestly a render like that is kind of hard to work with. I myself find that green or red really doesn't often flow correctly unless used on like colored designs. Hence why I felt v2 flowed a little better. The coloring helped it to feel like it belonged there rather than just pasted on top like the others.this is the Original stock i had to work with.... Im still adjusting to stocks instead of renders... I used to only do renders, but I felt like a change in pace... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ウェンキ Leki Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 I see koby. Thank you for explaining. ^_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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