Guest Alchemist Posted January 7, 2007 Report Share Posted January 7, 2007 Something I came up with. I'm planning to make one with each of the FFXII characters following this style.Any comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-PHXN- New001 Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 I do like it a ton... The black underline is TOO dark, just lower the opacity a bit.I love the colorscheme, and its nice and soft Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† shinji Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 grunge style does not suit the stock nor does it suit the bottom blue half. has no flow within it. just change the grungey background and make it flow better...text face can also be changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Osirus Thone Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 I like it, it catches my eye only thing i dont like is the font and that underline its so dark and odd looking sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koby Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 To be honest, nothing flows. The background looks bad and doesn't fit with the stock, the text is just there and doesn't fit with anything else either. I don't see anything good about it, sorry. You can do alot better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Alchemist Posted January 9, 2007 Report Share Posted January 9, 2007 Thanks for the constructive criticism everyone, it really helps me, as I am planning to make one for each of the FFXII main characters.And Yeah, that one was pretty bad, though I did like the brushing at the bottom of the stock.I made another, Balthier. I think this one turned out better than the first.C n C please. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Osirus Thone Posted January 9, 2007 Report Share Posted January 9, 2007 hmm i dont know why but this one i just dont like. its done well and all just doesnt catch my eye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-PHXN- New001 Posted January 9, 2007 Report Share Posted January 9, 2007 I didnt really have a problem with the first one, But this one has a nice flow to it.The text could be improved upon, but this has a smoothing feeling to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koby Posted January 9, 2007 Report Share Posted January 9, 2007 It's okay, but you need to work on the lighting and contrasting, as well as the text and blending. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linoud Posted January 9, 2007 Report Share Posted January 9, 2007 The first one at first is good but it doesnt flow and keep your attention for long, the second one is good but his hand looks a little weird to me. o_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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