Just Something I Thought Of...

[Kingdom]

*le sigh* I used to have a topic up in the writing section of the old forum, but since my hard drive crashed like RIGHT when the site moved - I didn't get a chance to save any of my poems (No matter how crappy any of you, and I know a few who liked them actually, may have thought they were). So now they're scattered among the many notebooks that I have. And I have far too many of those anyway.

So I was lying on my couch like... 30 minutes ago when two little beginning verse thingies came to me and I knew I had to write them down before I forgot and now... Well... I have two pages worth of a poem that sprung from that. ._.; So Imma post it on here. So ha. x3

I haven't named it yet but... yeah.... Enjoy?

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All the misery in the world

could affect not a thing,

save for one conscious mind.

And Love endowed,

what Hate could not,

the heart and soul

entwined.

And Death alone could

spur God's wrath

when he has taken

an angel from Him.

And all the lights in Heaven

could do not a thing,

save become evermore

dim.

And when all pain and

suffering have become

that of obsolete.

Then Death's mission is

no more.

And thus, in turn,

complete.

(2nd Page)

And when the universe

is silent

once more perhaps

a new world shall be born.

A world of peace

and prosperity

whose heart has

never been torn.

But then again one

mind cannot fathom

how the universe

will unfold.

For the universe's fate

is all it's own,

full of

mysteries untold.

But when man can turn around

and see through time,

to what the future

brings.

He'll simply smile

and hum a tune

to which all

creations sing."

Well, that's it. I don't know if you'll like it, any of you, because this style is so different from my other writing style. And that this will probably be the only one of it's kind. That is until, I'm in the mood to be as deep as this anyway. ._.; But I still hope you enjoyed it. I liked writing it ( even though it interrupted my "falling asleep" phase of my nap D: ).

*-Nina Elizabeth Stone-*

(Kingdom)

Edited October 7, 2012 by Emotional Outlet

[Saya]

That was good! I didnt know your writings before, so I'm not really one to judge. Its pretty deep and I think you're really talented!

[Kingdom]

Heh, thanks. ^^; Yeah, I get random spurts of inspiration(that go from 'a poem every day' to 'thrice every week' or 'a half month in between') and [try to] work from there. I thought of something that sounds odd but "descriptive" as my Music teacher put it.

{ Sweet Despair }

Chocolate mourners

candy graves.

Forgotten Sweethearts

without names.

Gummy worms that

feast on fear.

Elicit screams

where none will hear.

Popsicle forests,

gingerbread mounds.

Raving spirits that

haunt sweet towns.

Leave the candy,

leave the pain.

Leave your sweetheart

buried unnamed.

Chocolate mourners,

candy graves.

There are some things

sweetness cannot save.

There you go, enjoy it or not. It's weird, I know. ._. But I think I had too much sugar when I wrote, and I was feeling.... off at the moment. So, just... enjoy. ^^; I need pop. Imma go get some pop.

*-Nina Elizabeth Stone-*

(Kingdom)

[Saya]

Wow! Thats good, and like your Music teacher put it "descrpitive"! Did you like wirte that when you were high off of Halloween candy or something!? kidding...

Really good though! Plus anything others find "odd" i find interesting and normally wonderful!

[Kingdom]

Yes actually. =D I did. x3

And yay! <3

[AerisHeaven]

It's a great poem. Make sure you always back them up. I lost lots of my poetry from a cpu failure in 2001.

[Saya]

Got anymore that "normal" people would find odd that I'd most likely find interesting or possibly wonderful? If you do then well post 'em soon! I'm very anxious!!

[Kingdom]

Not yet, I have to finish Lord of the Flies - I think it's a horrible book, by the way. I'm soooo close to finishing it, that I just got back from having a blooddraw (ew). But I should be back to posting. And I gave the original copy of the first poem to my Music Teacher, she's good at not losing things. x3