Kikazu Posted August 1, 2007 Report Share Posted August 1, 2007 Just a couple of warm ups.Yeah, I know I used too much blue in that one. And you're not to suppose to see my name in that one How's this one? Just simple black and white.I just think my first one is not that great and second one is better..Anyways C&C please =)*Awaits deathly comments* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koby Posted August 1, 2007 Report Share Posted August 1, 2007 You signature lacks contrast and lighting. Work on that mostly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anooxy Posted August 1, 2007 Report Share Posted August 1, 2007 ?!? Where are the renders. I don't like them without renders. Backgrounds do not amaze me so much. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mujklob Posted August 1, 2007 Report Share Posted August 1, 2007 I care more for the top one more than the other as it has some colour to it. As Koby said, they both lack any sort of difference of lighting and so they both look rather bland. As for the design of the background themselves, they look fairly appealing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Napoleon Bonaparte Posted August 2, 2007 Report Share Posted August 2, 2007 Both are really simple designs. Great in my opinion because I don't know how to do those kinds of backgrounds. *GASP* :x Those would work real great if you used some kind of stock image with them. I agree what with Koby said about more contrast. :> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Emotional Outlet Posted August 3, 2007 Report Share Posted August 3, 2007 I don't think they need a stock in order to be interesting--I've seen a lot of great abstract stuff. These might benefit from having a stock in them, if only because they're rather dull and people's eyes would be drawn to the stock instead.I like the black and white one, and I can totally see your name in the first one. I don't really know what you should do to improve it (because I'm only the peanut gallery) other than to look at a lot of abstract pieces, figure out what makes them more interesting, and apply that to future pieces. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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