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Warm up


Kikazu

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Just a couple of warm ups.

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Yeah, I know I used too much blue in that one. And you're not to suppose to see my name in that one :P

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How's this one? Just simple black and white.

I just think my first one is not that great and second one is better..Anyways C&C please =)*Awaits deathly comments*

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I care more for the top one more than the other as it has some colour to it. As Koby said, they both lack any sort of difference of lighting and so they both look rather bland. As for the design of the background themselves, they look fairly appealing.

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I don't think they need a stock in order to be interesting--I've seen a lot of great abstract stuff. These might benefit from having a stock in them, if only because they're rather dull and people's eyes would be drawn to the stock instead.

I like the black and white one, and I can totally see your name in the first one. I don't really know what you should do to improve it (because I'm only the peanut gallery) other than to look at a lot of abstract pieces, figure out what makes them more interesting, and apply that to future pieces.

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