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Yep, it was so good when I checked it out. Only one person is behind this and there is a co-writer, it seems. So only one guy is doing all the animation effects and such. For that reason I really liked it :P There are some little bit of editing flaws, though. But, all in all it's pretty good. Can't wait for more :D

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Yeah I sent him this reveiw

"

mellavelli Review

Alright first off I'll say your video is pretty good, Don't be offended by any of this I only offer constructive criticism.

Pros:

I loved the new designs of the characters

Most of the animation was well done

Some of the voice actors did their job nicely

The story seems alright, better then some of the dbz spin off stuff

The villains are quite cool and they feel like they belong in the dbz universe

Cons:

Some animation gets a little faulty, which I'm sure you are aware of.

There are unneeded long pauses at some points like Majin Uub and this wife I felt it dragged on for much to long and at one point there wasn't even any animation happening

A few voice acting parts didn't do such a nice job

This is simply coming from another editor but great job guys."

He replyed

"Hey thx, i like this kind of critism, it 's to build!!!

I knew exact that these parts where to long, but it was to difficult to kill my darlings.

next time i will listen to my subconscious, because somewhere in the back of my head i knew it..... but i ignored it T-T"

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