new sig

[-Zero-]

I decided to take a break from abstract style sigs, and I went back to something along clipping masks and what not, so here's a sig I did. I just put in what I thought looked good, and I got this:

I'm sure there are errors here and there, but I'd rather have people tell me them than searching them myself, so a bit of CnC would be appreciated.

[Trend]

I like your style, very clean looking.

The white dots (on the left) seem to distract from the focal point, maybe if you adjusted the transparency a little so they blend with the back ground a bit more. Other then that it looks great.

[† Ferocia Coutura]

I disagree. I think the white dots add to the overall appeal of the sig. Yes, you want the focal point to stand out, but you don't want the sig to be boring everywhere except the render. You might as well just have a render.

In my opinion, I would have added a layer of purple over the entire sig, set it to soft light, and gave it a 50% opacity. That would blend it a little more and also help the render match the background.

Well done, though!

[Koby]

I agree with honey about the dots, but I'm not sure about his other suggestion. Would have to see it in effect to judge. Great signature. The SZ is nearly unreadable however.

[-Zero-]

In my opinion, I would have added a layer of purple over the entire sig, set it to soft light, and gave it a 50% opacity. That would blend it a little more and also help the render match the background.

Funny you should mention that, because I actually did, although I guess it was too light of a purple. Now that I think about it, the SZ doesn't look good like that but anyway, thanks everyone for your feedback.

[-Zero-]

Thanks for the feedback everyone. I went ahead and made a variant. I might have added too much purple and might have over saturated it, but I've seen sigs with this style so yeah. A bit bigger this time, and I moved the SZ and made it more visible, although it might take away the focus.

V3:

This is my 2nd variant: V3. It exposes more of the sig. I went ahead and moved the SZ again, and tweaked some of the colors, so it's halfway between V1 and V2. Lighting has been fixed a bit, and I went with a black all around border instead of the white horizontal bars. Any and all comments, criticism, and suggestions are accepted. My final version will become my new sig for the forum......maybe.