Kyo Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 okay this is the first concept for my cd cover for my graphic design outcome. The photo's were taken by me, the girl is called Eirinn and shes a friend of mine. the idea is shes supposed to be a solo artist, bit like avril lavigne sorta. anyway basically the resolution was quite low (my bad lol) on the original pics. so what i've had to do is boost the pics to the size i needed them. the photos themselves have been edited in photoshop and the text added. the border needs work too i feel. but as i say its a first concept so tips would be most appreciated. however abuse my work and i will kick your ass in a very interwebbish fashion lol. =P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drazhar Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 WAUW! great work dude!That's really good looking...but if I HAVE to say something, it's the following:may the green (text/border) a bit more yellow brownish, since it's an autumn themed pic, and green isn't quite autumn.And the back side is a bit dark and monotone if I say it myself, so you could add a light blob (like on the front of the CD cover) or whatever you call those things, but make it a bit darker. And if you do, I would place it in the lower left corner. well that's about it... maybe something like move that japanese sign down, and place her name above it so change the order to: name, japanese sign, name of cd... or something, but I dunno, you decide.Wow dude, even now I would already buy the cd XD, great job! Keep on going! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyo Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 well im not changing the design but thanks for the border tip. tbh the border isn't green either but thanks anyway. i get what you mean, i'm not keen on the border either. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pulse Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Make the Subfont smaller and further away from the focal point Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eskimotaro Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 I second that about the borders and the subfont.Other than that it looks great! Though I'd like to see a bit more work with the song names at the back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyo Posted November 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 ok this has been re-edited but i don't have my pen drive with me (i fixed it at college). thanks for the tips its helped alot. i'll show the finished result when i get my drive. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grefiti Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Wow thats sweet. I would also change the boarder though, and maby work on the blending on the first girls head a tad. But thats only because you asked for criticism. Great job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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