Guardian 7

[Rezin King]

Chapter 1: Aimlessly Brilliant

I could tell you some legend or start off the way every story does but i think i should change it up.

"Hey Noah wait up" said Rolis Schnieder a classmate a friend to Noah who always seems to have an upbeat attitude wherever he goes.

"Hey Rolis, sorry for walkin away i just got some stuff on my mind," said Noah Enoch a rather down to earth fellow.

"Is this about what you are going to do with your life again Noah because you and I both know that you are one of the smartest people in this whole campus" said Rolis with a bounce in his step and a never failing smile.

"Yeah it's just that I want to make sure I choose the right path well anyways i should be getting back to the dorms" said Noah with a look of deep thought on his face. Noah lived in room 240b along with Rolis and the illusive Adam Cage. Noah got to his room plopped down on his semi made bed and decided to check all of his social networking sites like Facebook, kametsu, and twitter. He first checked Facebook where he had no notifications but he did have a friend request from a Moses Brave who had the mutual friend of Adam so Noah decided to add him. Next he went to check kametsu again no messages but he had a friend request from MosesOf7 which started to freak Noah out but when he checked his twitter and saw MosesTheGuardian was following him he quickly shut off his laptop and went to look at his window wondering who moses was and why the hell was he stalking him.

well so ends chapter 1

Edited October 7, 2012 by Emotional Outlet

[Rezin King]

Chapter 2: Receiving the Olive branch

Noah decided it was time to go and get something to eat. He opened up his fridge and didn't see anything he wanted so he asked Rolis if he wanted anything from Chow Mein Dane's, a local Chinese restaurant, which Rolis said sure. So Noah called up the place and asked for a delivery of some Curry chicken and some General T so's chicken for him and Rolis respectively. So him and Rolis were waiting in their dormitory's lounge when he got a call who he thought was from the driver saying he was close but it wasn't.

"Hello Noah I guess you've realized I've been trying to get a hold of you by the sites you frequently visit" said the mysterious voice.

"Who is this and what do you want from me" said Noah in a hushed whisper so as to not alert Rolis.

"Well you can ask that to my face when I get there" said the mysterious man as the line suddenly went dead.

"Hey Noah the food is here" said Rolis as he opened the door to let the man in but at the same time another man entered the dormitory and headed to the security desk.

"Hello there I'm here to see my nephew Noah ya see I have some news about some family that he needs to know" said the man with a calm smile on his face and a strange looking cane in his left hand. The Pudgy security guard behind the desk asked for some ID which he was able to confirm was real at least under normal procedure.

"Noah would you come here for a minute" said the security guard who sat behind the desk looking impatient for his shift to be over. "You need to sign your uncle in okay" said the security guard wanting Noah to hurry up.

"Hello Noah so good to see you" said the man as Noah signed him in. "Oh sir here you are I'll be paying for that" said the man as he paid for the boys meals.

"Hey Noah who is this" said Rolis with a surprised look on his face but overjoyed that the man just paid for his meal.

"This is my uncle _____" said Noah truly not Knowing what the individuals name was.

"Moses, I'm his uncle Moses and I hope you will understand that I will need to stay here tonight" said Moses as he put his hand on Noah's shoulder and closed his eyes to reveal a weird birthmark that looked like the number 7 on his left eye.

"Why not besides Noah has always been nice to me so Its no big deal" said Rolis as they all started to walk towards their room.

End of Chapter 2 hope you enjoyed and please give me some feed back so I know where to improve and I'll even put characters in my story based on the following info.

Name:

Age:

Job: Teacher, Student, Faculty, or Security or mabey even something off campus

Alignment: Good or Evil

What best describes you: Cursed, Blessed, or Normal

And if you wanna add appearances or certain facts or accessories then go ahead but please give feedback okay

[Kinara Uzumaki]

I guess the story needs a little more description of the characters and the events that occur, plus a bit of attention on the grammar and punctuation. There is a sense of abruptness when you read it through. You've got a good idea though and I'd really love to see you write more.

If you don't mind, I'd like to be a character of a Guardian Angel Warrior that studies in Noah's class but at night, helps out people without their knowledge. I'd like the name Aura but then if you decide to change it, it's alright with me Age would be about 20 I guess. A good character but cursed to live alone without anyone to care for her. Appearance is up to you although I'd like her to be a striking beauty in both Angel and Human form.

Keep writing and hoping to see more soon^^^ Good luck!!!!

[Rezin King]

I guess the story needs a little more description of the characters and the events that occur, plus a bit of attention on the grammar and punctuation. There is a sense of abruptness when you read it through. You've got a good idea though and I'd really love to see you write more.

If you don't mind, I'd like to be a character of a Guardian Angel Warrior that studies in Noah's class but at night, helps out people without their knowledge. I'd like the name Aura but then if you decide to change it, it's alright with me Age would be about 20 I guess. A good character but cursed to live alone without anyone to care for her. Appearance is up to you although I'd like her to be a striking beauty in both Angel and Human form.

Keep writing and hoping to see more soon^^^ Good luck!!!!

yeah i kinda am not used to writing stories but I wanted some good feed back so thank you and ill try and fit the changes in

[Kinara Uzumaki]

yeah i kinda am not used to writing stories but I wanted some good feed back so thank you and ill try and fit the changes in

Writing a story is never an easy task and you'll need a lot of encouragement to keep going till the end. So, yeah, I'm glad if I helped^^^^^^

[Rezin King]

Chapter 3: Dorm Room Hustle

So as they walked to Noah's room when they crossed a mirror in the hallway. They all stopped to look at it. Noah looked at himself in the mirror and noticed he had his father's silver hair, his mothers blue eyes, and a body similar to that of his brother, but one thing no one else in his family had was a weird 7 shaped scar or birthmark on his right palm. Then Rolis looked in the mirror and noticed that his recently dyed turquoise hair looked lovely against his green eyes he also was an inch or two shorter than Noah who happens to be 5"10. Then we see Moses who would have to be around 40 with black hair, a salt and pepper beard, Hazel colored eyes that seemed to almost to glow, and that weird scar on his eye.

They were about to leave when an earthquake happened and the rumble almost sounded like an horn then if things weren't bad enough blood splattered on the mirror and everyone looked around for the source. "ROLIS," Noah shouted when he saw a claw had pierced rolis's chest from behind by some weird shadowy creature. "Damn, I thought we had more time" said Moses when his scar began to glow. "Wait you knew this was going to happen" said Noah but than he grasped his arm because the scar on his hand started to burn and his eyes went from blue to a golden color as well as his hair started to turn white. "I cannot believe this boy had this much power within him and he didn't notice" said Moses as he looked at the boy then he turned and faced the monstrosity that held an unconscious rolis. "Noah look deep within yourself and find your ark or weapon of protection" said Moses getting ready to use his own.

"Shine Forth Rebel of Fate" said Noah as his sword appeared before him but then something weird happened it transformed and strange markings appeared on Noah as he completely obliterated the monster and then proceeded to pass out. "What is with this power that this kid has its almost as if well I'll think about it later right now i gotta get these kids to their room" said Moses as he picked the both up ran to the room kicked down the door and put Noah on his bed while he worked on rolis.

End of Chapter 3

Hope everyone enjoyed and feed back please plus if anyone wants to do some banner work or artwork please tell me so we can colaborate k

[Rezin King]

Chapter 4:A Symbol Of all Your Sins

Noah awoke with a feeling of having a weight brought off his shoulders but he remembered a strange dream of seeing a beautiful angel saying wake up over and over. He only slightly remembered what had taken place when all the sudden he heard yelling. "Part the Red Sea and Burn away the darkness, Burning Hope" said Moses as he unleashed his ark and started sealing the wounds on Rolis. "Is he gonna be alright and also I need some answers" said noah as he had a hand to his forehead because of the headache he had. "Well for starters hes going to live but there are some negatives such as he has been tainted" said moses to noah with a stern look on his face. "Second thing is that you are a Seven or a person born or with the mark of god" said Moses as he stood up from Rolis' bed. "Lastly you were out for 3 hours" said Moses as he was headin towards the bathroom doors.

Later that evening rolis awoke feeling groggy and his chest felt of fire. "Well glad to see your better dude" said noah as he brought food to his friend. "Gentlemen tonight I want you to rest up tonight for tomorrow we make our way to the Priory" said moses as he sat in his chair reading a book called the guiding light. As Noah dreamt that night he had another vision of the angel only this time he noticed it looked like a girl from his class.

[Rezin King]

Chapter 5: The priory of around nine

Noah awoke early in the morning to find himself in the back of a SUV traveling to a mysterious location. He found out that his heart was beating rapidly and that his hand was pulsing. He was starting to wonder why he was chosen for this thing after all he was never really good at anything. When he used to try to find his talent he found that he really wasn't good at anything for his drawings were sub par, his stories were not that great, and he just overall never felt like he belonged. But now he was being taken to a priory along with his friend Rolis who he had been friends with in high school. The funny thing about Rolis is that he used to pick on Noah way before they became friends. But here Rolis is now sleeping with demon taint running through his veins.

"We're almost there boys" said the mysterious Moses whom Noah is still skeptical of but he did save Rolis so he's gotta trust him a little. As they were driving they could see a goldish like building coming into view.But they stopped like several hundred feet from it. But Noah could see some energy coursing around the building as if protecting it. Rolis woke up wondering where they were but still acting very much tired.

"Boys wait here" said Moses as he got out of the vehicle and went to the barrier and said the chant "Orasas Meritos Paretee" and there was a small hole in the barrier so that the SUV could pass through. Moses ot back in the car and drove through the hole with it closing behind them. They then pulled up to the gold and white building that bore the symbol of the sevens. As they walked in they wre greeted by a peculiar person.

"Welcome to the Priory of Seven, my name is John the batiste and it is so good to see new faces" said john. Meanwhile Moses was pulled off to the side and shoved up against the wall by a man with good sized muscles and long red/blond hair. "Dammit Moses why did you bring that one here we arent just some theme park attraction here" said the man. "Well the one boy has been tainted and i was thinking we could purify him and make him the twelfth familiar, Sampson" said Moses looking past the sunglasses and into the eyes of the man holding him.