AxelVIII Posted April 9, 2013 Report Share Posted April 9, 2013 (edited) "My life is like I am crawling on shards of broken glass, with just as much of a health benefit. However, I can not see or feel the pain that should come with it. I see anguish in the eyes of my loved ones, They are able to see the damage, but can do nothing but watch. The glass upon which I crawl representing past events that have left me scarred and numb. Broken glass, can not be fixed, Past events that can not be changed." Some may see this as Dark, but I write about how (When) I feel, and what's around me........And not much is around me -Nervously chews on cookie- Don't avoid the Dark guy please. If you like this, please critique it, criticize is even. Thank you. Edited April 11, 2013 by AxelVIII 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark_Angel13 Posted April 15, 2013 Report Share Posted April 15, 2013 You heard him! Don't AVOID(!) the dark guy lol. This is a little dark but also kinda sad and deep, I like it. A simple name suggestion could just be Damaged. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkie Pie Posted April 15, 2013 Report Share Posted April 15, 2013 Ah I second "Damaged" as the title tbh! And don't worry, my work is also quite dark. It's just us writing what our hearts tell us, yeah? n_n Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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