Change of Fate

[Rezin King]

A CHANGE IN FATE

Prologue

                    We all know how prophecies go, A boy or girl chosen by fate from an unlikely posistion will grow to become a Hero. Well that was how Bond was raisedas a young boy working the farmland with his strong muscles his golden hair and his boyish blue eyes. When bond was around 16 he was told of his destiny to be the one to stop the Black Emperor from being summoned onto the mortal plane. So Bond set out to get the relics of power to stop this event from happening.

 

                     First he when to the Ruins of the Vinehold to get the Shield of Gaia. This would allow him to fight with the power of nature and the strength of stone. But first he had to fight the Guardian Bear by trapping it with the chains of mercy that were there to test his compassion and see that he was better than the evil he was trying to stop. After that he recieved the shield from the gracious bear. Bond gave his thanks as he left the ruins knowing that the Guardian Bear was happy to have his freedom from responsibility back.

 

                    Next Bond went to the Hall of the Frozen Maiden where he fought many of Tundra Titans and Frostbite Goblins. Along the way he found a girl who had lost her dad whden the two of them went on an expedition of the old castle. So Bond guided the girl through the catacombs until the found her father who had been frozen solid by the Maiden who was killed long ago. So Bond shielded the girl from the Maidens attacks until he saw an opening and he trapped the maiden in stone which ended the Maidens Tyrany. Bond then broke the ice that encased the father which had brought hope back into the maiden. This then shattered the curse that the maiden had been under so she gave the Aetherchill Axe to Bond to cool the fiery hate of his enemies. So with father and daughter reunited, Bond left for his next his next destination the Armory of Thorin.

 

                    Within this Armory was supposed to be the Saviors Plating but no one ever told him of the technology that was here to guard it. So Bond went through the Workshops and saw all kindds of things he never would have seen as a poor farm boy. But soon he hadd to stop his fieldtrip because the Galvinized Drones which he was having trouble with due to the fact that the were resistant to the cold and there were to many to use earth on so he ran through the corridors of the armory until finally he found the saviors plating which gave him the ability of electricity which was a good thing too because Dr. Einison had went crazy and tried to shoot him dow to which Bond reacted by determination. He cut the mad doctor in two sending a spray of red mist to scatter. Bond Realized he would have to do this more as he heard that his love interest as well as several other princesses had been taken prison secretly under the Crimson King.

 

By the way see if you can see references as the story progresses

RAZZLE FRAZZLE

Edited March 28, 2013 by rezin deadpool

[† Emotional Outlet]

So is this prologue a summary of what's to come, or is it stuff Bond did in the past and we're picking up with the Crimson King's kidnap plot?

[core101]

sounds good

[Rezin King]

Chapter 1: A Haze in Fate

 

                   Bond decided that he must rescue the princesses now before the ritual so he stormed the castle.

 

                     "Intruder on the South wall" ,said a Guard of the wall. Then a bunch of guards came in with gritted teeth and scowling eyes as they went to attack this nuiscance. They tried to stop him as their spears clashed against his shield but to no avail. Bond then froze them in place so that he could rush into the castle interior. Bond then rushed down the hallways until he was met with great resistance in the hallway leading to the dungeon.

 

                   "You won't be making it any farther you little slime" said a Guard bearing the symbol of a spade on his armor.

 

                 Meanwhile within the dungeon there was a great disturbance as a reaction to the noise outside.

 

                  "What is going on out there" , Said one of the guards to Guard Captain Renault. Renault then turned to the guard with a look of pure unfiltered anger and smacked the guard for his insolence.

 

                 "Boy you only need to know that you are to protect these prisoners from any outsider trying to break them free so  dust yourself off and due your job" ,said Renault as he left the dungeon to go deal with the threat.

 

                "Why do you work for SCUM such as him you are actually one of the nicest people within this whole castle and yet you get treated as the lowest peice of trash here" , Said Alicia Silverhawke as she stood behind the bars looking at the good guard.

 

               "I am also a guard of this Kingdom and that is why stand the abuse because if I cannot handle being a SIMPLE GUARD then I am useless" said the Good Guard as he was brushing the dust off his armor when the dungeon door burst open and Bond stepped through. Bond saw a different aura on this guard than the others because he wasn't as tainted as the rest so there was still a chance at redemption. The Good Guard reacted to this intrusion by pulling out his twin swords.

 

               " I am sorry I have to do this kid but........." ,said bond as he charged towards the guard and threw him into the wall behind him making an indention and knocking out the guard.

 

 

End of Chapter 1

 

Well hope you enjoy and stay tuned for the next installment

 

Razzle Dazzle Mctazzle the 3rd

Edited April 2, 2013 by rezin deadpool

[Kinara Uzumaki]

Um......I think you need to slow down a bit on the action in the story. Plus I feel as if your prologue was all confusing. As EO pointed out before, does it give us a summary of what Bond had faced before the actual story begins, or is it of the things he has to face in the future?