[Deck] Yu-Gi-Oh! - Deck CnC Please.

[Bardon]

I'm asking for advice/feedback for people to give their comments on how I can make it better.

1|Soi|Demise, King of Armageddon

1|Lon|United We Stand

2|Sjcs|Gold Sarcophagus

1|Cp03|Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World

1|Psv|Beast Of Talwar

1|Soi|Raviel, Lord of Phantasms

3|Mrl|Giant Germ

1|Soi|End of the World

1|Tlm|Reshef the Dark Being

1|Tlm|Final Ritual of the Ancients

1|Cp03|A Feather of the Phoenix

1|Sye|Swords of Revealing Light

2|Dcr|Archfiend Soldier

1|Sdzw|Bottomless Trap Hole

1|Wc08|Burden of the Mighty

1|Sdde|Caius the Shadow Monarch

1|Fet|Deck Devastation Virus

1|Sd6|Divine Wrath

1|Abpf|Djinn Cursenchanter of Rituals

1|Abpf|Djinn Disserere of Rituals

1|Sovr|Djinn Releaser of Rituals

1|Lon|Fairy Box

2|Mrl|Gravekeeper's Servant

1|Dcr|Great Maju Garzett

1|Sod|Hammer Shot

1|Pgd|Helpoemer

1|Sdj|Just Desserts

3|Ysd|Kuriboh

1|Sd09|Megamorph

1|Mrd|Mirror Force

1|Crms|Multiply

1|Pgd|Newdoria

1|Cp01|Pot of Avarice

1|Taev|Dark Effigy

1|Crv|Goblin Elite Attack Force

1|Sye|Monster Reborn

1|Mrd|Solemn Judgment

1|Jump|Tragoedia

1|Mrd|Sangan

1|Lon|Dark Necrofear

1|Ptdn|Fires of Doomsday

1|Sdy|Wall of Illusion

1|Drev|Fabled Raven

1|Tshd|Chaos King Archfiend

1|Ha02|Fabled Valkyrus

1|Wc10|Stygian Sergeants

1|Sdj|Dark Hole

1|Jump|Darkness Neosphere

-SIDE DECK-

1|Ptdn|Dark Illusion

1|Lod|Array of Revealing Light

1|Abpf|Djinn Prognosticator of Rituals

1|Sovr|Djinn Presider of Rituals

1|Soi|Ruin, Queen of Oblivion

1|Soi|End of the World

1|Pgd|Dark Jeroid

Its really my favorite deck despite the fact that I lost quite a few times with it......

So yeah, you may begin criticizing it........to a bloody oblivion.....xD

[Koby]

I'm guessing with the Card #'s this is a deck you use in real life? Next time it'd be easier to read if you left that out and used spacing as well as separate the monsters, spells, and traps. It's harder to go through and see how the deck operates the way it's currently listed to be able to give much of any advice without putting too much ::effort:: into it.

[Bardon]

LOL sorry bout that! XD

Monsters:

1|Soi|Demise, King of Armageddon

1|Cp03|Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World

1|Psv|Beast Of Talwar

1|Soi|Raviel, Lord of Phantasms

3|Mrl|Giant Germ

1|Tlm|Reshef the Dark Being

2|Dcr|Archfiend Soldier

1|Sdde|Caius the Shadow Monarch

1|Abpf|Djinn Cursenchanter of Rituals

1|Abpf|Djinn Disserere of Rituals

1|Sovr|Djinn Releaser of Rituals

1|Dcr|Great Maju Garzett

1|Pgd|Helpoemer

3|Ysd|Kuriboh

1|Pgd|Newdoria

1|Taev|Dark Effigy

1|Crv|Goblin Elite Attack Force

1|Mrd|Sangan

1|Lon|Dark Necrofear

1|Sdy|Wall of Illusion

1|Drev|Fabled Raven

1|Jump|Darkness Neosphere

Spells/Traps:

1|Fet|Deck Devastation Virus

1|Sd6|Divine Wrath

1|Tlm|Final Ritual of the Ancients

1|Cp03|A Feather of the Phoenix

1|Sye|Swords of Revealing Light

1|Sdzw|Bottomless Trap Hole

1|Wc08|Burden of the Mighty

1|Lon|Fairy Box

2|Mrl|Gravekeeper's Servant

1|Lon|United We Stand

2|Sjcs|Gold Sarcophagus

1|Soi|End of the World

1|Cp03|A Feather of the Phoenix

1|Sye|Swords of Revealing Light

1|Sod|Hammer Shot

1|Sdj|Just Desserts

1|Sd09|Megamorph

1|Mrd|Mirror Force

1|Crms|Multiply

1|Cp01|Pot of Avarice

1|Sye|Monster Reborn

1|Mrd|Solemn Judgment

1|Ptdn|Fires of Doomsday

1|Sdj|Dark Hole

Extra:

1|Tshd|Chaos King Archfiend

1|Ha02|Fabled Valkyrus

1|Wc10|Stygian Sergeants

Side Deck:

1|Ptdn|Dark Illusion

1|Lod|Array of Revealing Light

1|Abpf|Djinn Prognosticator of Rituals

1|Sovr|Djinn Presider of Rituals

1|Soi|Ruin, Queen of Oblivion

1|Soi|End of the World

1|Pgd|Dark Jeroid

This better?