DeathTheKid Posted October 20, 2012 Report Share Posted October 20, 2012 (edited) Okay, well since I'm starting to do gfx I'm just gonna make this topic my showcaseWallpapersThis is my first wallpaper or should I say gfx ever lol.Tell me what you think no matter what it is. I want to start doing gfx after seeing all the amazing thins people can do.The only problem I have with it is the two bars on the right side. Now that I look at it, it doesn't seem to fit in.The original size is 1600x900 which is my laptop resolution.Signatures Edited October 26, 2012 by DeathTheKid 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† poetictragedy Posted October 20, 2012 Report Share Posted October 20, 2012 (edited) Pretty good for a first creation! Your colors and font choice are good.I'd suggest moving everything (the bars, render, text, etc) toward the middle more; this would give it a better focus area, as opposed to having the render on one side and the text on the other.I actually like the color bars; they break up the circles a bit and make the whole thing more interesting.And I always recommend this to new artists: Google some tutorials; they're a great way to learn new tricks.Keep at it! =D Edited October 20, 2012 by poetictragedy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathTheKid Posted October 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2012 Thanks for the feedback. I actually didn't think about moving the bars over to the middle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolrawr Posted October 20, 2012 Report Share Posted October 20, 2012 (edited) This is good. Don't stahp. Please.Lol anyway yeah I agree with the bars being a little out of place. Maybe you could have had them going diagonal and having the text on the bars.Also your Azusa render is a little stretched. Oh and ps: my wallpaper resolution is 2048x1152. You know just a little fyi. If you um ever decide on making more Azusa wallpapers in the future. Edited October 20, 2012 by lolrawr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Emotional Outlet Posted October 20, 2012 Report Share Posted October 20, 2012 You are subtle, lolrawr. Subtle like a charging rhino.I also like the bars and think they would look cooler scooted away from the edge. Everything else will start to fall into place as you experiment! It's really cute and I hope to see more from you in the future. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathTheKid Posted October 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2012 Updated my post to be my showcase now. Check out my Happy signature from Fairy Tail. Hope you guys and girls like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† poetictragedy Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 The signature is good! The colors and effects are really great; everything flows together really well. My only criticism is that it seems little empty on both sides of the render.You're definitely improving though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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