Naruto signature.

[Manifesto]

Lately Iv'e become a big fan of Naruto Shippuden so I thought why not make a sig ?

Iv'e taken some advice from people here and worked on my text hope it improved, also any critique would be appreciated.

[angelzd]

Wow, Nice one

[Trend]

Very nice Manifesto, Trend likes! Great color coordination. How long have been making sigs?

[Manifesto]

Very nice Manifesto, Trend likes! Great color coordination. How long have been making sigs?

For about 3 months then I took a break and now Iv'e been doing them for like 2 months so about 5-6 months I think.

[72night]

Lately Iv'e become a big fan of Naruto Shippuden so I thought why not make a sig ?

Iv'e taken some advice from people here and worked on my text hope it improved, also any critique would be appreciated.

It's actually not bad at all.

But I'd have to disagree with your lighting position. From what I see, it looks like the lighting is coming out from the upper right side of Naruto (my right, not the render's the render's right, not mine, my bad). The C4D doesn't eat up the render in any way, I really like that. The focus is really clear as well. You have the position of the text in a unique / right place, but the font(s) isn't something very preferable. You also could of done something really nice with Naruto's face, too.

Other then that, I actually like this piece.

[Manifesto]

Thanks man this is what I want ! I need to know what I did wrong so I can improve, as for what what said I'll take it into account and try and improve, thanks.