Hōtarō Posted August 20, 2011 Report Share Posted August 20, 2011 So this is something I've been doing off and on for awhile now, and I wanted some actual concrit on it.I wanted another way to make backgrounds, and something that you don't see all the time. Plus, I wanted to go a bit more towards my roots a bit - smudging. Combining smudging and what I currently do to make something.Be brutally honest. I don't want anything less.(will add more as they come) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvilDoomBunny Posted August 21, 2011 Report Share Posted August 21, 2011 I like it more for something more like a logo , its very pretty and broody too , water colored clouds over a smoggy city. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hōtarō Posted August 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2011 I like it more for something more like a logo , its very pretty and broody too , water colored clouds over a smoggy city.Thank you. Come now. Surely with over 30 views on the thread, more people have something interesting to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† RazorDan Posted August 21, 2011 Report Share Posted August 21, 2011 I get what your doing but it doesn't really appeal to me. It is well done though, maybe, like bunny said, you could add a few buildings in the background. I really like the colours though and the text is great. I'd definitely look forward to more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Irish Posted August 21, 2011 Report Share Posted August 21, 2011 So this is something I've been doing off and on for awhile now, and I wanted some actual concrit on it.I wanted another way to make backgrounds, and something that you don't see all the time. Plus, I wanted to go a bit more towards my roots a bit - smudging. Combining smudging and what I currently do to make something.Be brutally honest. I don't want anything less.(will add more as they come)I like it, it's simplistic and makes you focus on the whole thing not just one part of a focal. I find it fun that your are going back to your roots and experimenting with that. Like I have said about all your work, its Really refreshing to look at cause its always unique and fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hōtarō Posted August 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2011 I get what your doing but it doesn't really appeal to me. It is well done though, maybe, like bunny said, you could add a few buildings in the background. I really like the colours though and the text is great. I'd definitely look forward to more Thank you. I will be sure to try adding some buildings, and simply...adding more. More will surely be on the way!I like it, it's simplistic and makes you focus on the whole thing not just one part of a focal. I find it fun that your are going back to your roots and experimenting with that. Like I have said about all your work, its Really refreshing to look at cause its always unique and fun.Thank you, Irish. Very much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hōtarō Posted August 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 Not to uh...double post or bump my own thread, but here is something even more different from what I normally do, and using something that used to be taboo in my world (spot what it is and you get a cookie).I wasn't trying to go for anything in specific. The whole idea behind it was to try new things, and this certainly is something new, like the first one.Just like the first, conrit is very much appreciated and welcomed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Irish Posted August 24, 2011 Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 nice experimenting there. If it didnt have your name, i wouldnt have known it was yours.. LMAO! Great job.Lighting is Beautiful.Depth is perfect.Colors go well.Text is a little eh(my text is terrible so I can't really say anything about it)and the Background feels like it belongs.Great Tag there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hōtarō Posted August 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 nice experimenting there. If it didnt have your name, i wouldnt have known it was yours.. LMAO! Great job.Lighting is Beautiful.Depth is perfect.Colors go well.Text is a little eh(my text is terrible so I can't really say anything about it)and the Background feels like it belongs.Great Tag there.Thank you very much. I wasn't too thrilled with the text either, but normally I just...slap whatever on there. By the time I got to the text I was getting ready for it to be done so I can get opinions, as well, so I rushed it.I think I'm going to keep experimenting with this style. It's certainly different. Gives me a little more wiggle room as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jyles Posted August 24, 2011 Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 I like how you think, your idea is really innovative and I think you can take it further I don't know how you can improve, but I can see your idea getting more and more improved throughout time, it's really smart tbh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hōtarō Posted September 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 In my boredom and sugar/caffeine rush...I have two other things.Again. Concrit.(First is more like my original post, second is more like the one I had posted earlier.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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