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@PLGF: Wow, such an in-depth critique! I guess I didn't really consider the speed, and just arbitrarily chose some numbers. I thought it looked okay, but now that you mention it... I chose smaller intervals and re-uploaded it as my avatar, so hopefully that's a little better?

@Verity: I'm not very familiar with the dodge and burn tools, so I don't mess with them much, but I suppose I should start, haha. I've heard that lighting trick before, but never could get it to look right. I'll give it another go next time though!

Thanks for the comments, everybody~

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Yeah I don't realy know how to use most of the blends...most of mine it do to luck.  The only ones I really am good at using is Overlay, Soft Light, and Hard Mix.  The rest just happens when it happens.  LOL!  I always like your work Poe.


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How could i miss that... im sorry, this comes so late. rl keeps me busy...


 


What did you tried to achieve?


 


And why are frame 8 & 9 the same? Pay attention to the last part of the animation... It looks like there is a break. I would delete frame 9. Maybe thats the part youre not happy with.


I also would increase the speed a tiny bit.


 


Over all, it looks neat. I like it.


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Gotta say poe you're really good, I love your current avatar, I might have to make a request from you for one sometime! :D I just love how she looks x3.

I also see you've met one of my buddies on another forum (The Welsh Paddy) cause I recall the Deadpool Sig you did.

Your Text and Effects are really spot on for most of these.

Personally I like these the best.

fYnFs.png Love the pop out, you did her perfectly :D

31W13.jpg Loved the blur effects and background, it was a really nice blending.

llf7o.jpg love the background and blending in this one, and I like how you did the bar & text for the sig looks very professionally done.

z9LAc.jpg Can't say much its pretty much perfect :3

p2QDT.jpg Loved the border in this one I'ma have to steal this style for something sometime ;D!

Just a tip for ones like this sotw91.png if you're using photoshop try to get a black lined border around the outside of the render if possible I forgot the name of the tool but it pretty much adds a border to the render at the bottom of the options in Render Options, you can tone down the opacity to help it blend or make it a solid line for comic effect.

All in all you're a really good graphic artist aside from the one flaw in the spidey one your work's perfect :3 keep up the great work, I look forward to your new stuff in the future ^_^

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if you're using photoshop try to get a black lined border around the outside of the render if possible I forgot the name of the tool but it pretty much adds a border to the render at the bottom of the options in Render Options, you can tone down the opacity to help it blend or make it a solid line for comic effect.

All in all you're a really good graphic artist aside from the one flaw in the spidey one your work's perfect :3 keep up the great work, I look forward to your new stuff in the future ^_^

That's probably the stroke option. I use that all the time for borders, but I didn't think to use it on the render in this case. I'll have to try that next time.

 

Ah, thanks so much~

 

I haven't made anything in a while, so I thought I'd try something completely different, haha. I played around with animation a little more.

 

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And tried another blinking avatar. I tried to follow PLGF's suggestions a little more.

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They both look reaaaaally good! :x I'm jealous, I think you have a knack for animation.
I like how you have a discrete popout effect on the ava too. Looks really neat. :3

Is there any reason why your current avatar isn't blinking, but the one in your thread is?  Just noticed your post in 'features' thread.
But, again, reaaaally cool work!

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Is there any reason why your current avatar isn't blinking, but the one in your thread is?  Just noticed your post in 'features' thread.

 

Yeah, the black and white avatar I had before was still working, but when I changed it, it wouldn't animate. Maybe somebody changed the rules.

 

p2QDT.jpg Loved the border in this one I'ma have to steal this style for something sometime ;D!

 

I completely forgot about this border style! I made a second version of my Syo signature with it. :3

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Superb work as always. I do really need to get you to make me one of these at some point. Anyways, on to CnC.


 


Momo and Nana - Looks great, nothing I would want to change.


Second one (I dont recognize the character) - Render is a little blurry. One thing that you could do to relove this is to not use really clean text like the text in "I only ever...".


Levi - Great banner. Only thing that bugged me was the layer with the diagonal bars, if the bars were faded slightly then I think the banner would look better.


 


Either way, great work on these and I would love to see more.


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Second one (I dont recognize the character) - Render is a little blurry. One thing that you could do to relove this is to not use really clean text like the text in "I only ever...".

Levi - Great banner. Only thing that bugged me was the layer with the diagonal bars, if the bars were faded slightly then I think the banner would look better.

 

Either way, great work on these and I would love to see more.

The second one is Gareki from Karneval. I hadn't thought to use a different font, I'll keep that in mind.

Banner - I was kind of trying to portray motion with the scanlines, but yeah, they did end up a little too prominent, whoops.

Thanks for commenting!

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