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A Nightmare Before Doma [FFVI Fanfic]

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Well, it's not really a fanfic, but more like a short scene delving into the mind of Kefka Palazzo before his attack to Doma's water supply. Kefka is by far my favorite villain on the series, so I just had to do this ^^ I'm posting the link to fanfiction.net because I don't want to format the text (put italics and so on) for the forum

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3183237/1/

Edited by Emotional Outlet

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My brother has done quite alot of writin ong fan fiction, however he never told me his name on it... so Its up in the sky what he writes...

Your writing style is sooooo good... I deffinatly like it, The vibe i get is this is more a screen play... like one you could translate into film.

I like it (though to be honest I'd skip around)... Keep up the great work :D

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