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CTalon

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  1. Downloading Kekkaishi encoded by [Yoroshiku], as well as 'Freezing' and Tegami Bachi - Letter Bee REVERSE as they are being released.
  2. Hi, i've watch 90% of your listed animes, my suggestion for viewing would be Blood+ the series or something shorter High School of the Dead or something mecha SRWOG Regardless hope you find something you're happy with.
  3. Great story guys, wait eagerly for the next installment.
  4. Hellp Clare, just join the forum and happy to say this is the first thread I've checked out, you've done well. Clever of you at this early stage to intertwine your first two character. It'll be interesting to read the next three 'prologues' and see how you introduce the rest of your main characters. As for improving your story, I'd can only suggest that in certain places you could uses words that create a certain ambiance and or clearer meaning (e.g. last two paragraphs the word/s 'collage' and/or 'coalesced' could have possible been used), in the end all this depends on the mood and feel you wish to create . But it's always easy for someone to suggest these things, or you yourself may have though of it in hindsight. I want your writing to improve so we can all enjoy your story, keep up the good work. Waiting for the next installment. :cool:
  5. New to this forum, I should say Kametsu Forums. Hope to find it an interesting place, cool people. Talk to you all later.. P.S. I'd like to hear anyones opinion about this place, friendly folk or a bit staid?
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