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RazorDan

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  1. Think I'm gonna immerse myself in Kametsu for the rest of the day, beats studying!

    1. Koby

      Koby

      Sounds legit!

  2. I totally agree on the discussion issue. Anime discussion is one of my favourite things to do and we definitely need more of it. I also agree with the cut throat negative atmosphere point. However, nowadays, I see a lot of new and friendly people on Kametsu and I honestly believe that atmosphere has mostly gone.
  3. As a fellow guy with a soft spot for romance, I STRONGLY recommend Clannad and Clannad After Story. The first show to ever evoke my tears! Oh and Code Geass has romance in it (I recommend Code Geass every single time)
  4. Thanks for the nice comments guys, think my quality's gradually improving too, so it's looking good. As for what you said about the lack of teamwork Axel, I do agree, but I just wanted to show the quality the freshmen have. It'll be a lot more realistic in future chapters! Anyway, the next chapter won't be out for about a week due to the stress of studying for my upcoming exams, a university place is at risk . Just thought I'd give you guys a heads up, I appreciate you all!
  5. very good startt, im intrigued. Looking forward to more!
  6. My god, this is golden! One of the best things I've read in ages! I'm looking forward to more man!
  7. Kametsu High Soccer Club chapter 5 is up!

    1. Dark_Angel13

      Dark_Angel13

      Sweet, off to read!

    2. DuLake

      DuLake

      I've got so much to catch up on! Like the whole thing! AAAAGGGHHH!

    3. RazorDan

      RazorDan

      Hope you enjoy it guys!

  8. Any moves or terms you don't understand, ask me! Chapter 5: The Match- Part One Adam Rivers towered over Apollo. He was huge, well muscled with broad shoulders and an easy, disarming smile on his face. His hand was outstretched and Apollo took it, shaking it politely. 'Apollo I presume, I've heard all about you,' he smiled. Apollo was taken aback by the easy going and relaxed attitude of the big man, completely at odds with his hulking frame. 'Can't imagine you've heard much. You yourself have an um large reputation,' replied Apollo, hesitantly. To his relief, Adam roared with laughter. 'You guys can start, let's have a good game,' he chortled, slapping Apollo on the back and walking back towards his team. Apollo stood staring at him, surprised at his relaxed demeanor. He turned back towards his own team, his mind going over the selection. Lynn and Chris hadn't been successful in their attempt to recruit Kinara, she had laughed in their faces and ignored all their attempts. Because of that, they'd had to move Lynn back to right back, with IP on the right side of attack. He walked up to the team that awaited him. 'We're kicking off,' he said to the Coach, who nodded in response. 'Right,' said Javier, clapping his hands together. The team immediately stopped what they were doing and looked at him. 'This may only be a friendly, but we're up against a really great player. This'll be a very good test for later on in the season when we go up against the very best teams. Good luck out there, I'm not looking for a perfect performance, but go and impress me all the same.' 'YES COACH,' responded the team, enthusiastically. Javier smiled. 'Let's go Bears!' he cried, the team's now traditional yet somewhat basic rallying call. As the players took the field, the Kametsu students roared their support, startling the opposition players. Kametsu got their nickname more from their fans than their players, something that the spooked Balamb High players were clearly finding out. All apart from Adam Rivers, who with a large grin plastered on his face, looked incredibly relaxed. Danny and George stood in the center circle as the referee blew his whistle, signalling the start of the match. ___________________ Danny received the ball from George and immediately tapped it back to Apollo. The captain controlled it and with languid ease lofted it out wide to the left for Axel to gather. The winger's touch was effortless and he looked up to see the opposition right back running tentatively towards him. He waited for his opponent to get close before passing it sharply to his right for Danny. The freshman knew exactly what his teammate wanted and played an inch perfect return pass that got Axel in behind his marker. Axel smiled. Too easy, he thought. Suddenly, Adam appeared, taking the ball off Axel's toe and running clear of the stunned winger. Danny ran to cover him but Adam ran threw him like a bulldozer. 'Shit,' swore Apollo, aware of the dangerous situation his team were now in. 'Jeff, pick him up!' he yelled. Jeff complied, approaching Adam cautiously. The big midfield player stopped. 'Close him down!' shrieked Javier from the sidelines, realising what was about to happen. Unfortunately for him, Jeff didn't have the same awareness, and so he could only stand and watch as Adam drillled an outrageous 45 yard that split the defence open. Fortunately for Kametsu, Adam's teammate just wasn't fast enough to catch it before it drifted out of play. However, it had taken just a couple of minutes for Adam to show just how good he was. Breathless punted the ball down field from the goalkick. 'Get it together Kametsu! barked Coach Martinez from the touchline. ________________ The next 20 minutes passed without incident, with Kametsu dominating possession but being stopped by the efforts of Adam Rivers every time they tried to get into the danger area. One man was keeping them at bay and that one man had nearly scored 5 minues ago. A powerful shot from the edge of the box that had crashed against the crossbar with Breathless watching on hopelessly. ' Lynn to me,' called Apollo. Lynn complied, passing the ball to her captain. Apollo looked up with dismay. Axel and Danny were both tightly marked, as was George. IP only had one man watching him, but every time they passed to him he lost the ball. Cursing, he passed the ball sideways to Chris instead. The left back confidently advanced, dribbling up the pitch as the Balamb High players focused on defending and left him alone. Chris smiled. He found the lack of opposition insulting. Guess I'll have to do something special, he thought. He accelerated, entering the Balamb High half, and a defender came out to meet him. 'Pass it,' called Jeff, away to his right. Chris ignored the shout and continued his advance. As his opponent came closer, Chris knocked it through his legs, before bursting past him. Almost immediately, Adam was there, chasing towards the loose ball. 'Chris pass!' roared Axel. The freshman ignored Axel too. He got to the ball before Adam and out of nowhere, conjured up a magical roulette spin on the ball, spinning past a stunned Adam. The crowd gasped, before screaming his name. Chris now found himself just outside the opposition box, with two opponents charging at him. Now he passed, fizzing the ball into Danny, who controlled it and stood with his back to goal. The defender marking him smiled, thinking that he had Danny trapped. Unfortunately for him, Chris had carried his run on, and Danny had spotted him, so he backheeled the ball through the defenders legs, sending Chris away, one on one with the goalkeeper. With supreme confidence and composure, Chris slotted the ball into the bottom corner, and the fans erupted. Grinning, he turned back to the rest of his team mates and high fived Danny, before casually jogging back to his position as chants of 'Chris' filled the ground. On the sidelines, Javier Martinez shook his head in disbelief. 'These freshmen,' he muttered. On the pitch, Adam looked surprised too, his easy going smile replaced with an inquisitive frown. He asked Apollo, 'Who is he? I've never heard of him. Or the forward who passed it.' 'They're freshmen. I've never seen them in a real game either,' replied Apollo, awe in his voice. Adam whistled. 'Looks like this match will be pretty fun!'
  9. Hey Sunlight! Welcome to Kametsu, enjoy your stay. I'm very interested in your choice of music, I listen to a similarly wide range. Which kinda artists do you particularly like?
  10. My bad, seems you have already started. Wow! What a great first chapter, very impressive! I love the fight club/write club reference, and the whole mood/atmosphere of the story. This is one I'll definitely keep an eye on, keep it up!
  11. I would've signed up sooner, but I've had a busy week haha. Just start the story, hopefully more people will sign up after reading!
  12. Name: Joe Age: 21 Gender: Male Appearance: Tall and skinny Career aspiration: Footballer Shitty job they're working instead: Pizza delivery boy One deviant behavior they most dream of engaging in: Doing the hot lonely housewife he regularly delivers to Favorite curse word: Bastard! Religious affiliation: none Choice inebriant: anything he can get his hands on Most loathed song: Bieber (If male) How many inches they add to their penis size in open discussion: 2
  13. im liking this more and more, story's bubbling nicely. Keep it up!
  14. Don't think I made it clear enough, but I actually meant to use stuff like Twitter to advertise member's stories, their RPs, their art etc. I think if Kametsu has a social media presence, it'll help everyone get to know each other through more interaction. I understand your point but I think if we handle it properly, as a way to showcase and stimulate Kametsu, it can only be a good thing.
  15. We've been discussing a lot of things recently, how to make Kametsu more of a community has been a central issue. Well, I have a couple of ideas/questions I'd like you guys to consider. Youtube. I've been thinking about this for a while actually, and I reckon this is the perfect time to introduce it. I was thinking of posting youtube videos about the forum/anime/games/books/tvshows/etc. If I posted these, you guys could check them out, give me suggestions etc. I was thinking specifically of a Q and A type video where the forum members will send me questions (through kametsu or youtube) and I'd answer them in the actual video. The questions can be literally about anything, which members I'm closest to, which forum stories I like, my favourite anime, my favourite food, which movies I'd recommend, what music I listen to, anything! Hopefully we can all have a bit of fun with it and it can become a staple of the forum. Twitter. I use twitter a whole lot, and I know just how useful it can be when it comes to friendships and interacting with people. I'd happily run a kametsu account where I'd tweet about Kametsu related issue, be it the Informer, new threads/RPs/stories, seasonal anime, member of the day, birthday shoutouts etc. I honestly think Twitter could be hugely useful in adding to the community atmosphere of Kametsu. Mini Khronicle This is the idea I'm least confident with but I was thinking of a very small, shortened article type piece that's devoted to the forum. I'd fill it with the latest Kametsu news and events. It'll also be hopefully pretty light hearted and comic. Well, I just want you guys to feedback to me. Would you be interested in any of the above things? Do you have any of your own suggestions you wanna share? Do you use Twitter? Get posting! NOTE: I'll personally be monitoring and maintaining this thread. Play nice.
  16. Well, I just watched the third episode, and its a lot slower than the other two but it does a good job of introducing some new characters and building the atmosphere. It gives the main character a bit of depth too. A solid episode, I look forward to this show every week.
  17. school has made me immensely busy, but I have a day off tomorrow! will post my next chapter then :)

  18. I'm liking this a lot, story flows really nicely and I can actually imagine it in my head. Looking forward to more, curious about their backstories
  19. Alarm goes off at 7am, I ignore it and role out of bed half an hour later. Bathroom, wash my face. brush my teeth etc. Back in my room, I check my phone/Twitter, change into uniform. Now, I should go straight down for breakfast, but I usually jump back into bed for literally 5 minutes, hence why I'm always late. Anyway, its like 7:45am by the time I go downstairs, have a few sips of tea, and leave the house. Then I walk for about 3 minutes to my bus stop, usually have to sprint after the bus too . Then I have to get off in the city center and catch ANOTHER bus to school. I'm always late! Oh and I also randomly get a runny nose! Always put a few tissues in my pocket before I leave home haha
  20. I like the whole mood and the feel of it Wake. The girl seems like an interesting character. Never read a story about the main character losing their memory, looking forward to more!
  21. I'm loving the increased activity in the Art and Lit section, so happy! Visit it folks!

  22. haha I wanna get down to the match too, gonna be fun to write! And yeah trying to give all the characters a bit of screen time to build them up. Personally, its been so long since I've wrote I actually think my writings been a bit weak. Hopefully im improving bit by bit. id be interested to know what some of you guys who've read my old stuff think about it.
  23. just seen the second episode and it definitely continues the greatness from the first. right now I'm so excited for this, could be show of the year! i see what you mean with the Btooom comparison but i actually think the main characters more like Lelouch from Code Geass. i know I complained about him before but he was really good in this episode. EXCITED!!!
  24. interesting you'd compare it to Btooom. I'm watching that too but struggling to get into it really
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