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  1. Chapter 3: Training to the Fittest

    After the overthrow of planet Satur Dyuu was able to secretly learnt of the Frieza Rebellion and how it failed so tragdicly. But now with a whole planet to herselself, she can now create an artifical moon, and prefect her Oozaru form.

    Dyuu traines regirlessly for the day to defeat Freiza the Ruler of the universe.

    "Huff...Huff...Huff...Huff...man I'm beat I battle against so many Dark Astroids." Said Dyuu falling like a tree. "Okay tomorrow I try to make an artifical moon...ZZZZZZ." Said Dyuu fallin' asleep.

    That night a loud BOOM awoke Dyuu (Time: 12:00 a.m).

    "Mmmnn...What was that?" Asked Dyuu awaking from a good dream of transforming into a Super Saiyan.

    A Starship with the symbol of the Saiyans on the side of it. Just then crew steps out: the crew was none other then Turles, Cooler and Lord Slug, then they went on the assust.

    "Uhh...rhh...nhhh...kihhh this is prefect training and everything but if I don't do something quick then these villians're going to kill me!" Thought Dyuu getting hit back and fouth as if she was a volley ball between Lord Slug and Final Cooler.

    "Hehehe...you can't stop us!" Said Lord Slug pouncing on Dyuu's back like a volley-ball.

    "Uhh...kihh...rhh..." When Dyuu caught her balacne she put on her offenic. "Super Kamhamahamahamha !" The first to go was Turles.

    "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Turles was killed. Next to go was Lord Slug.

    "Super Kamahamahamahamahaamnha!" Slug was oblitirated.

    "Now you Cooler!" Said Dyuu looking at Cooler with intimatdation.

    "Now, now let's not be hasty----" Said Cooler with fear.

    Dyuu jumped into the knight sky and fired a kamahamaha blast.

    "No...noooooo-------!" Cooler was also obiltrated.

    "Now the only thing to do now is to go to bed.....THUD!" After a hard but yet shrot battle Dyuu finnly gets to sleep (2:32 a.m)

  2. Well keep in mind the first season takes place in the year 0 Year of the Big Freeze of 0YF. Goku existed but he's dead now.

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    Chapter 2: Finding a NEW Planet to Settle On

    As silence accured Dyuu realized that maybe just maybe someone survived.

    "No one could surrvive a super-nova explosion like that." Said Dyuu standing on a crator left behind by the Saiyan planet Vegeta.

    "Dyuu stand tall soilder." Demanded a mysterious viose.

    "W...who's...th...there?" Asked Dyuu looking around and not finding anyone.

    "Look behind you." Said The mysterious viose.

    Dyuu turned around and saw her father but in a ghost form.

    "Dyuu, I was part of the rebellion. I crept towards Frieza, Zarbon and Dodria jumped me. I was in a heap of troulbe if Frieza found me, but Zarbon had other plans for me, he chraged his Elegant Blaster and fired, he was killed along with the other Saiyans that rebelled. Planet Vegeta was destroyed also you and five others survived, go to planet Nameck and finish what Bardock started. Make Frieza pay for his crimes---" Explained Satur (Sat-Your) disappering in to the cosmos.

    "Right father but first I must find a planet to steak out, then I'll train and prefect my Oozaru form and create an artifical moon." Said Dyuu taking off in her space pod. As she apporches the Knight Plant she notices and anstroid field with electic currents. Crash! she crashes into the planet it self.

    "Rough landing...rhhhhhh"...Dyuu got of her space pod...BOOM! THE POD EXPLODED.

    "Damn life-forms're still here!" Let's play follow the Saiyan shall." Said Dyuu flying towards the outskirts. The firing mini-robots followed Dyuu to the outskirts, and Dyuu looked up at the full moon...and she transformed into a Great Ape...She destroyed everything and everyone even the king and by day-time she transformed back to normal. She now owns the planet

  3. Even if there is hardly any comments, I'mma still post it. :) Becuase that's who I am.

    This is a very long series but it's action packed so don't let it intimidate you. Enjoy, comment [if ya like] and just have fun with the series... I have written it up to 170 (writing 171 now), So like I said it's long. But it's action packed and from what I got on the other forum: it keep you on the edge of your seat wanting more. (and that's true from what they've said)

    Season 1: Intruder Saga

    Episode 1: Only One Survived

    One year ago a Saiyan rebelled against Lord Frieza, he was close to killing Lord Freiza but Freiza used a Death Ball and killed the heroic Saiyan and his army. Now there are only a few Saiyans that live to day thier names Raditz, Turles, Kakorot (Goku), Vegeta, Nappa and Dyuu (Die-You). But this story focus' on Dyuu the very first Su...I said to much already let the tale begin. On planet Rasfer a Saiyan team of one tries to destroyes the race.

    "RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" Shouted Great Ape Dyuu. BOOM! Buildings crumble and houses fall.

    "Sir, A-9 or Z-21, which code?" Asked Evacution Expert.

    "C-58, SURRENDER CODE." Repliyed General Mocle with his eyes closed.

    "G'bye Captin." Mockle got stepped on.

    "Genrahhhhhhhh!" Captin was as well stepped on.

    "Send the nuc. straight for the damn ape!" Demanded Scientist 1.

    "Right sir." Said Scientist 2.

    The missle was laughed, and Dyuu caught it in her big Ape pawms then she through it down the missle laugh and she escaped when the sun rosed well it wasn't a pretty site to see, so the planet in other words went BOOM!

    "Ha ha ha ha that was a party." Said Dyuu in her space pod. Now let's see what the bums are doing."

    No repsonce from planet Vegeta.

    "What I'll be damned to see if the planet has been destroyed." Said Dyuu pressing the botton on her scouter.

    Still no responce

    "Mmm...maybe the planet was destroyed? Well what ever." Said Dyuu.

    when she got to planet Vegeta's location there was no planet no sign of life.

    "No...the...planet...was...destroyed...shoot...Lord...Frieza..you'll pay for thi...!"CRASH! Dyuu crashed into a metor.

    "Am I the last of the Saiyans?" Asked Dyuu looking at the debris from the destroyed planet vegeta.

    A silence accurced was Dyuu the only Saiyan left or was there others.

    Hope ya Enjoy the series.

  4. Well Naruto Shippuden is on Disney XD tomorrow from (i think) 7:00 - 10:00 pm, don't remember and to lazy to turn on TV. I don't either, I mean I don't watch Cartoon Network anymore.

    EDIT: Nope nothing good that is. Cartoon network sucks now.

  5. Minato: greatest and bad ass ninja ever created

    Jiriya: Just because he's cool.

    Zoro: He uses katanas to fight. (btw: that's my favorite weapon)

    Portgas D Ace: He's a killer fighter and uses fire to fight (fire is my favorite element)

    Red Haired Shanks: Strongest Pirate besides Mihawk.

  6. Hey Everyone,

    I just registered today and I wanted to find a new forum because the one I was at died(not going to explain because I tried saving it). Anyways, I love to write fanfiction or original stories. I'm a HUGE naruto/shippuden fan, dragonball (z [gt can go to hell]) and InuYasha/the final act. I listen to mainly Japanese Music from Anime or just hunting it down on Youtube. Hamachi is my original character's name.

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