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Meaning of the Word Love


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Written by: Koby
Date: March 16, 2009


Meaning of the Word Love
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I look over at you
I see nothing but a shadow
of what we once were
I never understood
how we could let this happen
from the moment that we met
there was stars in your eyes
we were perfect for each other
forget all the cliches
throw them out the window
what we had was true
true love, or so we had thought
looking back, we must have been really naive
that kind of love could never exist
it was straight out of a fairy tale
we were foolish, naive, to ever think it would last
what is love for that matter
it seems it's just a meaningless word...
can it really not mean a thing
all the time we spent together
I'm looking back...
I can no longer see
except for a pitch black shadow
it seems to be looming over me
it's like death knocking on my door
I can't continue to exist
I can't be with you
but I can't live without you
We were never meant to be together
but I've fallen for you
That time has come and gone
is love really just a meaningless phrase
tossed around day after day
I was sitting here waiting in my room
pondering lifes... loves questions
Chemistry... we were nothing without it.
It wasn't suppose to be...
I see that now..
Maybe I'll get over it
So this is adios.

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Written by: Koby

Date: March 16, 2009

Meaning of the Word Love

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I look over at you

I see nothing but a shadow

of what we once were

I never understood

how we could let this happen

from the moment that we met

there was stars in your eyes

we were perfect for each other

forget all the cliches

throw them out the window

what we had was true

true love, or so we had thought

looking back, we must have been really naive

that kind of love could never exist

it was straight out of a fairy tale

we were foolish, naive, to ever think it would last

what is love for that matter

it seems it's just a meaningless word...

can it really not mean a thing

all the time we spent together♦

I'm looking back...

I can no longer see♦

except for a pitch black shadow♦

it seems to be looming over me

it's like death knocking on my door

I can't continue to exist

I can't be with you

but I can't live without you♦

We were never meant to be together♦

but I've fallen for you♦

That time has come and gone

is love really just a meaningless phrase

tossed around day after day♦

I was sitting here waiting in my room

pondering lifes... loves questions

Chemistry... we were nothing without it.

It wasn't suppose to be...

I see that now..

Maybe I'll get over it

So this is adios.

Hey Nice One i liked Few Lines xD ♦ Pointed :)

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Nice Koby! I think my only constructive criticism would be to take advantage of imagery. You got a story here of two lovers, would be cool to see it come alive! :)


 


Do you just write poems or do you write in other genres, too? I've often tried to write poems but they always seem to fall flat. 


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Nice Koby! I think my only constructive criticism would be to take advantage of imagery. You got a story here of two lovers, would be cool to see it come alive! :)

 

Do you just write poems or do you write in other genres, too? I've often tried to write poems but they always seem to fall flat. 

I actually haven't written much of anything for a couple years now, but yeah I usually just did poems with an occasional short couple page story here or there. I don't think I ever really kept up with the short stories I wrote though so they're probably lost to time.

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